I loved the whole story! Ryan...forever the hero... :) I love him for it too. Sandy and Kristin trying to be all parental was great. I thought Seth shared some great insight into why Ryan was the way he was. I don't think Seth gets enough credit. :) This entire story was amazing. I just can't think of enough nice things to say about it. Thank you SO much for sharing and keep writing!

Nice story, I loved it!

OMG! what a great story!! it made me laugh and cry!! i know you wrote it ages ago but ive only just read it!!brilliant!:D

Storymom you are just the BEST BEST BEST story writer ever. I love the way you go into the family relationships and their feelings and thoughts about each other. You also have an excellent talent for giving just the right amount of detail in events. KEEP THE STORIES COMING PLEZ

99.9 is not considered a fever any more, by any Health professionals. Temps in the 99's are now considered normal body temperatures. A bit overheated, but not a fever. Only temps above 100 are given serious consideration. 101, a low grade fevor.

104, starts getting dangerous. The patients temp must be brought down soon.

108 - Brain's pretty much fried. You are dead.

Fantastic writing and wonderful description of Ryan's pain. Loved it!

wow your story is SO amazing! thanx so much for sharing it.

OK, so I feel like an idiot becuase I thought 21 was the last chapter and I even sent you an e-mail saying congrats on finishing the story and all that.

I am such a complete loser. It's hard maintaining this level of idiocy. I work at it.

Anyhow, how sweet was this chapter? The boy not thinking he is worthy of such a big deal. Psh. Silly Ryan. You a Cohen now kid, better get used to it.

SO I admire your story telling abilities. I always looked forward to your updates because you can tell that you invest time and thought into each of these characters. And I loved the pacing. It was never too slow, never too fast, just right. And you had some of the absolute CLASSIC Sansy/Kirsten p,d,p moments of all time!
Superb job.

You should write a sequel, maybe 10 years in the future, with everyone married and with kids.

Hey!,
Out of all of the story's i have read urs is by far the best. When i think back on wat happened on the show parts of ur story always get mixed in their because it is so realistic and well written. And it could possibly hav somthing to do with me wanting it to have happerned.LoL! Well that's all i wanted to say! Ur a great writer and ur story is absolutly awesome!

Write more story's,
Sharon

You managed to capture the characters of the O.C.. It had a good plot and on a different note, Ryan can do so much better than Marissa. On another not have you ever read "It's a Mom Thing" by Lisa O'Brian here on ff.n? You might like it.

Sincerely,
Diana

Very good. You should continue the story on though. With things such as Ryan and Marissa etc.

I really liked that fic, a sequel is definitely needed! Well done

I loved it. The best about the whole thing, was that it looks real, like it could happen in the show. I loved how everone seemed happy in the end, and everyone with their own way to be. Loved it! Congrats for your entire story! It was really good! Mariana

YAY! great story! keep writing (other stories of course!)