Wow, I really like this, it's very original and well written! It's basically the Kenshin-gumi all over again now with Yahiko being like Kenshin and Miki is so much like Sano! But if Sano isn't dead can you include him later on?

hey i like these so far. to read about the contiuation after kenshin is gone. and both soujirou and yahiko are wanderers trying to help people like kinshin did, so are they eventually going to show each other tips n tricks about the others styles? and is the girl sanos daughter? i only know of one character that ever carried a large and completely covered weapon. so wouldnt she do the same? anyway, im seriously looking forward to the rest of the story.

Merchant of Death? o. Keep up the good work. I like it so far.

hey gr8 story update as fast as you can keep goin the wyay uou are i dont see anything wrong with it good luck!

Holy Cow! this is great. please update soon!

Well-written and interesting. I like the plot... just one thing - he isn't technicaly a 'battousai'. Battousai, if I am correct, stands for 'assasian', and he isn't really that yet.

The only thing I hate worse then a bad writer is a writer who could be better. Make no mistake, this is not a 'flame'. I just think you could put a little more time and thought into your work. But then again I am somewhat of a perfectionist (NOT perfect) and so I may sound harsh. Please just take your time writing and really think it through. You don't have to draw the story out fast to make it entertaining.