While I realize that this is an older story...I just found it and really enjoyed it. Great writing, kept me on the edge of my seat. THe devotion of Sara and Grissom felt real.

oh man was that a freakin rollercoaster ride or what i freaked out when you said that he was dead, i nearly quit reading right there, but im glad i never that was an awsome peice of writing, well done!

wow a great story= you even managed to create a believable Ecklie! Thank you

I loved your characterizations in this story, Grissom's especially. They were perfect - it's nice to see canon every now and then! My favorite part was when Grissom was critiquing the robbery. Very well written, detail oriented and a good mystery to boot. Keep up the good work.

You definately need a sequel to this one! :) His recoup and more Griss n Cath! :)

Keep writing!

Hugs

Alison

Gahh!! I thought he died about three times! And then I about cried three times! Very emotional. Very freaky...

good stuff. really enjoyed reading it.

your story is awesome! couldnt stop reading it.

Great story it was awesome.

Hey,
Loved this to bits!
I can't wait for more stories!
Keep up the good work!
~Mogs

Wow Taletha, that was a truly wonderful story!

So intense and emotional that it had me sitting at the edge of my chair. It's great that you managed to keep them all in character throughout the whole story. Especially your portrait of Conrad Ecklie was brilliant! I have seldom seen a story that managed to give such a fair account of this grumpy, arrogant man who is a fair and good investigator at the other side. Fantastic!

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful read with us!

Great ending. I like the way you went back and explained what happened to Grissom. Poor Grissom and Sara thinking they would never see each other again. Terrific job of writing those two.

This is a very different look at Sara/Gris-what a ride!

I really like the twist you pulled, poor Sara-a suspect!

yeesh!

I love poor Gris opening up like that-very good-and the characters really worked!

Thanks for a great read!

A great story! Loved it!

Oh wow this story was amazing! I loved every bit of it. I actually thought Grissom died at first. Luckly everything went perfect.