I'm curious as how this will turn out. This must be so frustrating, especially for Hermione, of all people. But then again, I always knew there was some good in Malfoy, and as you've pointed out in a previous chapter, I fairly believe a similar conversation could have happened between him and Snape. And I love the inner-thoughts of the characters, shows their true colors. Great writing!

LadyPeace X

you really need to keep writing. I love this story, it is so perfect. All of the character's personalities and habits are there. The story line is fantastic and I want to read more. I wouldn't worry about offense to readers. It is magically induced blindness and those who are offended really need to understand that. You can write what you want and if they're offended by it, they can stop reading it. I try hard not to give suggestions on how to write your story when i leave reviews so don't expect any (unless you ask for them in which case, I'd be happy to throw out some ideas). the only things I suggest are that you gradually have Hermione warm up to Draco. Not all at once but have them first start out the way you did (that is smashing) and have Draco initiate the attempts at civility. Hermione should be hostile towards him, that is naturl, when he trys to do this. the best way to make them finally become friends is to have them either have a big fight and then work things out, or have them get sick of fighting and make a truce. Harry and Ron of course would think that Draco did something to Hermione so have fun playing that up. I just realized how much it sound like i'm trying to tell you what to do but that is just a suggestion. two other things. number one, play up jealousy. I don't know hwow you feel in regards to Hermione/Ron or Hermione/Harry but try to incorperate some love fude if you can. Second thing, I LOVE FLUFF
! Please put some cute fluff in this story.
thanks for writing

Really love the story, and I think you're handling how Hermione copes with her blindness really well. Can't wait for the story to continue, please update soon.

Im loving thjis story so far. I love the fact that although Draco feels bad for her he isn't being all sappy. I also love that you made Slytherin have a reason for never winning the cup. Not because they were bad but because there is prejudice in the school. Keep up the good work I can't wait to read the nextb chap

Jessi

WOW. This fic is simply amazing! Although the concept is really all that new, I love what you've done with it. I like the way you showed the characters and how you're building things up gradually. It actually made me wonder...how does Hogwarts deal with blind students? Hmm...

i love the story, keep writing.

Could you please update it, please??!
It's very good
It's a very interesting premise

it's a pity you haven't updated this one for years... the plot is very interesting. can you consider my advice (and plead) to try and finish this one... I'm very hooked up, really.

considering it a strudy plot are you going to finish it?

very gd so far, read first 3 chapters, please finish it needs to be finished.
anyway looking forward to reading the rest
amazing so far

Can we have more please? :D

I wish, I wish you would continue with this! PLEASE!??!!?

Wow, that's a real author's talent. Walking around blindfolded to better understand the protagonist's position. That gives me a faith in your writing talents. Btw, the story is good so far.

" Hermione's loss of sight is devastating to her on an even larger scale, because of I believe she sees her identity as tied to her 'books and cleverness', the result of her extensive, avid reading and working ** her school assignments. "

Very interesting approach. I am impatiently waiting for the next chapters:) Good luck in writing!

Poor Hermione, she was so down about those book. Anyway, I like your story and I really hope that you continue to add to it.