  Smiles To Go 2007-11-04 . chapter 1Aw...cute! |
| AJeff 2005-10-10 . chapter 1 I pray she will take good care of you
And love you
The way I do I love your poem, especially these last three lines. Beautiful, |
| Joel-Gomes 2005-06-14 . chapter 1 nice poem. i can't say much right now. sorry. |
| MPJ Preteneder Shipper 2004-05-13 . chapter 1 It sound nicely done, but the timeline is off. Thomas was before Jarod ever met Zoe. Thomas was in the 3rd season and Zoe 4th Season. You did a good on MP feelings. |
| gemini006007 2004-05-12 . chapter 1 Hi Wee-hoo
Nicely done. You did a good job in expressing MP's hidden feelings.
Mercy |
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