starkidtw 2006-07-16 . chapter 5Love it, just live it, I hope you will write more Imzadi fics in the future, Jac, we love your fics! |
SpaceMan41 2006-05-11 . chapter 5The ending was a little cheesy, but I do have one of those smiles on my face that I can't seem to get rid of.
Very good.
-I liked the "I am my beloved and my beloved is mine," it reminds me of a song I once sang. Anyway, very very good. |
SpaceMan41 2006-05-11 . chapter 4OH YEAH!
That is such a good ending!
I am so happy he's home and they're a family and . . . YEAH!
Very good story, bravo |
SpaceMan41 2006-05-11 . chapter 3That is so sad!
Very good, but sad |
SpaceMan41 2006-05-11 . chapter 2Wonderful story.
I love that the story was Will and Deanna's story.
I also love that they're in love again
yeah! |
SpaceMan41 2006-05-11 . chapter 1Wonderful story.
-Meaningful plot
-Adorable characters
-Induces that herat-wrenching feeling and the lump in my throat.
Very well done |
DDR 2005-08-15 . chapter 5I really did like this story. In fact I had a dream about it after I read it. I know that's kinda wierd, but hey, that definitely means I liked it!
DDR
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LenniluvsBrian 2004-07-10 . chapter 5Amazing story! Loved it! Love Star Trek: TNG! lol. I'm currently writing a fic, though itz bSB/Star Trek:TNG related-lol. Adios!
~Lenni~ |
SherryGabs 2004-06-28 . chapter 5Wow! What can I say but... perfect! I felt so deeply about it, I went through a couple of tissues. Super writing, Jaclyn. Hope to see alot more from you. |
dream maven 2004-06-27 . chapter 5God, what can I say about this story. Perfect, unbelieveable, fantastic. This review writer thing says that I should 'comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved' but that's impossible. The only thing I would change would be to describe the period between their engagement and the wedding but the story is still stellar without that. Again, excellent, thought-provoking, imaginative, wonderful. Please keep writing and grace FanFiction.net with more like this one. |
Debbie Biv 2004-06-26 . chapter 5 A lovely story that I thoroughly enjoyed. |
Sarajayne 2004-06-22 . chapter 4 Ah what a satisfying end...sniffle sniffle... :-D |
Jupiter-Fire 2004-06-22 . chapter 4 OMG! I am so glad you updated, i was going insane with the wait, thats how good this story is. I hope you continue with an epilogue so we can see how it turns out. Also I was just thinking how great it would be if there was a Lily story for when shes older, like in her teens or maybe going into the academy (if she chooses that path) I personally think a story about 16 or 17 yearold lily would be awsome. Anyways, im going to quit brainstorming hopes and let you continue on doing what you do.
Thanx for an awsome story! |
hamsterlotrgirl 2004-06-22 . chapter 4It was great! It was kinda sad but all works out well in the end! I think you should defenitly do an epiloge!! great story thank you! |
Trekkie2007 2004-06-19 . chapter 3 I would just like to say that this is a wonderful story. I am a HUGE Riker/Troi fan and I can't wait to read the rest of the story! Thank you. |