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SheliaLuvsWTR4EVER
2009-05-17 . chapter 5
OMG, I loved everything about this story. Such a shame I came at a late time, I'm sure you could have used all the support you could've used back then...anywho, I just wanted to let you know, that I truly enjoyed this story a great deal. I will make a note to make it a Star Trek:The Next Generation weekend soon...Thanks for taking the time to share these great chapters with us. Take care.

Trekie fan for always!!
SheliaLuvsWTR4EVER
2009-05-17 . chapter 1
OMG, girl how you take me back to those days...I think I have only a few DVDs of the series, I know I have all of the movies of the Star Trek: The Next Generation...Now I'm gonna make sure I go to Amazon and get every season I don't have, but for now, I'm gonna finish the rest of the chapters. Thanks for your time,even though many years later, I'm now reading them...just don't know how much I loved these two and to know that someone was doing fiction and didn't know it, wow, talk about the memories...ok, think that's good for now, don't want to make you fall asleep...lol.
starkidtw
2006-07-16 . chapter 5
Love it, just live it, I hope you will write more Imzadi fics in the future, Jac, we love your fics!
SpaceMan41
2006-05-11 . chapter 5
The ending was a little cheesy, but I do have one of those smiles on my face that I can't seem to get rid of.
Very good.

-I liked the "I am my beloved and my beloved is mine," it reminds me of a song I once sang. Anyway, very very good.
SpaceMan41
2006-05-11 . chapter 4
OH YEAH!
That is such a good ending!
I am so happy he's home and they're a family and . . . YEAH!
Very good story, bravo
SpaceMan41
2006-05-11 . chapter 3
That is so sad!
Very good, but sad
SpaceMan41
2006-05-11 . chapter 2
Wonderful story.
I love that the story was Will and Deanna's story.
I also love that they're in love again
yeah!
SpaceMan41
2006-05-11 . chapter 1
Wonderful story.
-Meaningful plot
-Adorable characters
-Induces that herat-wrenching feeling and the lump in my throat.

Very well done
DDR
2005-08-15 . chapter 5
I really did like this story. In fact I had a dream about it after I read it. I know that's kinda wierd, but hey, that definitely means I liked it!
DDR
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LenniluvsBrian
2004-07-10 . chapter 5
Amazing story! Loved it! Love Star Trek: TNG! lol. I'm currently writing a fic, though itz bSB/Star Trek:TNG related-lol. Adios!
~Lenni~
SherryGabs
2004-06-28 . chapter 5
Wow! What can I say but... perfect! I felt so deeply about it, I went through a couple of tissues. Super writing, Jaclyn. Hope to see alot more from you.
dream maven
2004-06-27 . chapter 5
God, what can I say about this story. Perfect, unbelieveable, fantastic. This review writer thing says that I should 'comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved' but that's impossible. The only thing I would change would be to describe the period between their engagement and the wedding but the story is still stellar without that. Again, excellent, thought-provoking, imaginative, wonderful. Please keep writing and grace FanFiction.net with more like this one.
Debbie Biv
2004-06-26 . chapter 5
A lovely story that I thoroughly enjoyed.
Sarajayne
2004-06-22 . chapter 4
Ah what a satisfying end...sniffle sniffle... :-D
Jupiter-Fire
2004-06-22 . chapter 4
OMG! I am so glad you updated, i was going insane with the wait, thats how good this story is. I hope you continue with an epilogue so we can see how it turns out. Also I was just thinking how great it would be if there was a Lily story for when shes older, like in her teens or maybe going into the academy (if she chooses that path) I personally think a story about 16 or 17 yearold lily would be awsome. Anyways, im going to quit brainstorming hopes and let you continue on doing what you do.

Thanx for an awsome story!
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