Great story, wonderfully balanced, it as it all, angst, romance, comedy, adventure, suspense, action, etc. Apart some exceptions(if you ever write again quote"Let's do this"end quote I'll personally haunt you all the way to oblivion) the story is well written, with a brilliant plot, and the chapters are well organized.By the way, don't forget the shodai mineral sword.

Review done, here is a suggestion for a finale:

The Darkness, the very essence of anger, violence, sadness, rage... focused.The sky was no longer a sea of unending void, for a sphere was only visible.A mist, barely visible, was leaving the masses, the soldiers, the demons; the Kyubi (nine-tail) fox, imposing, mighty, overwhelming, brightened, as it's past ghosts left;From the sphere, more solid it appeared, yet defiance could (still!)be felt...
-You dare to oppose the Darkness-said Yashiro- and punished you shall receive! fell the anger, vengeance, treachery of thousands of years of world wide suffering, and fall before the Darkness!
As he speaks, mist, dark mist came from every direction enveloping once again the sky, even if only for a moment, for shortly afterwards a spot made of pure negative intent was visible. Then, blazing orange chakra enveloped it, preventing it from escaping. Now, the spirit of darkness was trapped.
In aw, living beings could see it's own evil shadow being absorbed, and soon, it was over. It had disappeared, and in it's place a blond, 13 year old boy remained.
Every leaf shinobi hurried to him, the first one being a lavender eyed girl in a white jacket.
-We did it.

P.S The seal that trapped the Kyubi fox now contains the darkness. The demon, freed not only from it's jailor as well as it's anger, won't kill without provocation.

YAY! i love the story so far! Im sad that it isnt further along, but its going good. YAY! I like the kind of stores like this.

Keep on keeping on, Bloodstained

haha, thats hilarious!
naruto thinking he goes back in time xD
great chapter!
*still laughing*

Dude you have just got to update this story for it is totally kickass.

hey this is a hell of a story. i can't wait for the next chapter and i want to read as yashiro gets his ass kicked. oh and where is the weapon that ebi was making for naruto? i just thought that i ask.

very good story!
one of the best I've ever read!
please continue! i know i'm kind of late to review, since you updated in 07, but please don't stop writing this story!

This was the best stpry in the history of Naruto fics! I hope that you continue to develope your writing more and more. I only had one problem in this fic, and that was, I don't think that Hinata would be scared of the Kyubi. I mean, yeah, if Hinata never knew Narut then she might hate him, but she loves Naruto so I think that she would be a bit surprised at the most. All in all... 9.5/10! Awesome job!

Interesting read. I'm looking forward to seeing how you finish it up.

A couple of the plot monologues were borderline dull.

And there were parts of the love scene between Naruto and Hinata that could have been captured much better. In fact, you probably would have elicited more emotion from your readers if you used more dramatic pause and were more descriptive in their physical reactions. Also Hinata, at first, would likely have believed herself to be seeing a ghost. The initial lines were lackluster.

Wow! you write SO good!! update soon, please!!

hahahaha! you got me laughing and laughing! I love your story!! i can almost see it in the anime!! the part with the time-travel and the village in chaos is SO funny! (my mom's thinking i'm crazy 'cause i'm laughing alone... n_n)

Simply amazing! I can't wait until you update! I want Naruto to beat that guy!

Interesting start, up to the next one.

I wonder, will you have Akatsuki in this story. I would love to see how they react to a whole empire of Demon carriers, Even though none of them are Bijuu. Also, what about that sword Ebi made for Naruto? What happened to that. Furthermore, I hope you realize that there is a difference between Sennin and Sannin. Sennin is translated as Hermit, while Sannin means Three Ninja, Referring to Jiraiya, Tsunade and Orochimaru. Whatever, update soon.

whoa, intense. this story is so gripping! and yay for iruka! i was so glad to see he'd come too, because he's usually overlooked all the time, even though he's awesome.
the fight scenes are great! i can't wait to see what happens! ^_^

To Be Continued...how I hate those words, because they mean I have to wait to see what happens. Awesome fic, totally suspense filled, amazing emotions, a good build up of a NaruHina relationship(unlike most of the NaruHina that exist)...Truly a fic that I cannot wait for the next update in.