MightyMaeve 2008-06-30 . chapter 1Wow! I was sucked in and couldn't stop reading. That was a beautiful oneshot. I could see the scenes in my head as if i were reading a beautifully illustrated doujinshi.
Thanks for sharing.
I'm always a sucker for Sub/Sei pairing fanfics. The darker, the better. It hits my fangirly sadistic/masochistic buttons bang-on! |
Silver Salamander 2005-04-22 . chapter 1That was so amazingly brilliant!
Very in character. Loved it lots, best thing of this genre I've EVER read. Wow. |
bitter green tea 2004-09-02 . chapter 1I'm a sucker to S/S fics. I just can't say no to angsty Subaru. ^^;;
Just to let you know, I really like this fic. It's short and sweet. Well, sweet as in good/interesting not sugary fluff sweet. There's nothing fluffy about a man trying to drown. O__O
But I'm rambling again. Anyway, I hope to read more of your works! |
kitsusa 2004-05-28 . chapter 1 nice cute |
kankakodoku 2004-05-25 . chapter 1Interesting.
I generally dislike shounen-ai, but you portrayed their relationship well in according to that perspective. Am I making any sense?
Ah well. Anyways, nice fanfiction. Gambatte, ne? |
Rhole Hidaka 2004-05-16 . chapter 1Hi. Sorry the art isn't currently available, when I first posted, it was in a temporary folder on my server, which has long since been deleted. I'll post again when the art is up again. |
WildHeartz 2004-05-13 . chapter 1I liked this fic despite the fact I haven't really liked Subaru since Tokyo Babylon. Sei is one of my favorites. He maybe having a game with Subara's heart but he does care and this was evident in the fic. |
Xyn 2004-05-12 . chapter 1I like this. The metaphor of drowning is a little redundant, seeming to appear in every sentence, but it was effective regardless. And I love how Seishirou kisses him, knowing that that would be enough to sway Subaru from killing himself. XD Dialogue is well done in that respect. Characterizations are great; all in all, a wonderful fic. Definitely one of the better X fics out there. ;) |