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KuroxSaku
2009-05-16 . chapter 3
Wow. Just... Wow. Awesome story! Absolutely loved it! I'm a huge ToadxRogue fangirl (It's my X-Men OTP.), and the way you wrote it was, for a lack of a better word, magic. Simply magic. Please write more!
aperez1440
2009-05-01 . chapter 3
is that it realy how sad how horably sad and there is no happy ending eather love your story
But He Hit Me First
2006-11-04 . chapter 3
Oh I just love this. And I want more! anyways, Truely though, I love this, it was fun and sad. Thank you for writing this!
Racetrack's Goil
2006-05-25 . chapter 3
So cute.
michael68
2006-02-26 . chapter 1
I was wondering if I could commission you to write a story about the Venom symbiote seperating itself from Eddie Brock and bonding with a MUTANT who eventually joins the X-Men. There are a lot of unappreciated characters that most people dismiss because their abilities are deemed to be useless in combat or are not powerful enough when compared to others.

The symbiote isn't evil, just the host. Besides, Professor X could easily help suppress any violent urges.

Also, would bonding with a symbiote give someone immunity or resistance to Rogue's power? I'm a big ROGUE fan who thinks she can do a lot better than Gambit
The Blitzkrieg Buffoon
2005-10-11 . chapter 3
Aw! Thats so CUTE!! it reminds me, I REALLY must get to work on my own Toad fic. Blasted writers block. >< Anyway wonderful story! It made me smile and go AWW! ^-^
Ed's Tomato
2005-09-21 . chapter 3
I actually liked this a lot. COudln't originalyl imagine Toad and Rogue together but it worked. And now...NOW...you have me angsting after it. Damn you. Would you write me some more ultimate toad? No one does and I would lov you forever.
Ed's Tomato
2005-08-15 . chapter 2
Cor, I wanna hear more. MORE. This is really good. I'm not usually a fan of the Rogue/Toad pairings, but it works with Ultimate. And yes they were cruel to draw Toady so unattractivly, but in my head he looks as he should. m...Anyway, spot on and all that.
Nyltiak
2005-05-11 . chapter 3
Only four reviews! Criminal, I say! Criminal! That was marvelous. You actually made me hate Rogue even more than I did before for awhile, and that's saying something. ((I hold a long grudge against Rogue...don't ask. Long story. Not like anyone would ask in the FIRST place..))That little...WITCH... daring to say Toad isn't even human! I shall pummel the Twinkies Filling out of that 'un, alright!
~Nyltiak
Alexandra P. Useless
2005-04-15 . chapter 3
Loved this one... Loved it. Showed some of Toad's feelings. It regarded him as a living, breathing, creature... Not just the thick-headed, heartless henchman he's been made out to be.

Every one needs that... EVAN the evil, ficticous ones.

Well done.
YourAngelStandingBy
2005-01-29 . chapter 3
I've read all of your Toad stories, and love every single one of them. You've got a real nack for writing that guy...
~Angel:)
theshiz
2004-05-13 . chapter 3
Yeah, me again. Toad/Rogue may soon be my OTP. Heh. I like it muchos, please please write more Toad stuff. I love him, really I do.
Masayous
2004-05-13 . chapter 3
Hey, just read this from start to end and have to say that i am impressed.
Rogue and Toad is not a couple i would wholly agree with, but they do make a sweet fanfiction couplet.
This is a very nice stroy, the characters are well done, and my only criticism is at the start of Chapter two, you jump suddenly. It is kinda confusing for the reader, and it might suit better to put a slight introduction in at the start to say what has been happening and that Rogue has joined the Xmen.
This would be a good place to end your story, but i have to admit i would enjoy another chapter.
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