I'm finding this quite enjoyable. Please continue.

Do you want to know what caugh my attention? Your word count is 1987. Don't know why, it just did.
But I liked it, I really liked it.
You've written it well, and it's nice to hear Ben's perspective on his life. :)

Hmm, I liked it, it was painfully, well rather depressingly, sad to read about how Ben never knew his parents, it was still well written, however, I would like to know how they (Luke and Mara,) perished. It's great but not *great*.

This is a very good story. I liked it because, for once, one of the Solo/Skywalker family wants to do something different. It was a good change.