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ilexx
2006-06-02
ch 2,
abuseHey, I just found this. It's Beka/Harper, isn't it? And beautiful, too. Thanks for a great read.
nicca
2004-09-28
ch 2, anon.
abusehey...NO I HAVEN'T IS IT TRANCE OR SOMEONE??

MORE NEED MORE..
great job.
Nicca
mizor
2004-09-10
ch 2, anon.
abuseInteresting showing the same love scene from both points of view. The man is obviously Harper. I would guess the woman is Rommie based on her comments about pain and knowing he wanted her.

At first I was annoyed at the vagueness but after I read the A/N I understood what you were trying to do. It might have worked better if the A/N had been first.
MaryRose
2004-05-25
ch 2,
abuseI like. I think it's Harper and Rommie.
Nalana
2004-05-15
ch 2,
abuseThat was nice. I like your style. :) And, not /exactly/ knowing lets the reader shape it to whomever they want ^.^ I like that. Though, I think I know whom your writing of. Hehe.
X3
2004-05-13
ch 2,
abuseCute
Very Sweet keep up the good work with whatever your next project is
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