  Aranami Gouka 2008-09-12 . chapter 25WTF IS YOUR PROBLEM. HOW COULD LET TEMARI HAVE NARUTO'S CHILD. I THOUGHT THIS WAS A NARU/HINA!1!1!1!1 |
| Guardian 777 2008-09-03 . chapter 25 Nice |
| xXCrimsonTearXx 2008-08-10 . chapter 6 Hinata is awesome Ur a great with Fanfic :D |
| Kasuchi, Koichi 2008-07-26 . chapter 25 Why does Shino have to be the bad guy?! If it was Kiba I could understand, but not Shino, he is one of the best characters in Naruto. |
| OnGuard 2008-03-22 . chapter 6 good chapter, but far away by nickleback would have been a better song, i hate guns and roses. |
| fantabulous 2008-02-23 . chapter 25 well, it was actually a well-written story. I respect that you tried to make up a jounin exam, but there are no jounin exams. It could have been feasible until the epilogue. you kinda f*ed it up when naruto got temari pregnant. I understand that a little drama is good for a story, but as a ver protective naruhina fan, my 2 cents is that y'all took it a TAD too far with that one... that was some f*ed up sh**. |
| Feuer und Wasser 2007-11-29 . chapter 25 ok i didnt like the fact of narutos son... but the rest is ok.. sayonara |
| darkrapier 2007-10-11 . chapter 3 Dude this is really good i like how you keep up with more than just on persons romance. |
| NARUTOHINATALOVER 2007-04-12 . chapter 9 I just love the stories you have written. My favorite would be hinata and naruto. by the way, the only thing i dont like is the sakura and saskue pairing. other than that, this is 1 of the best stories i've read. kewp on writing! this is my second time reading this! |
| baby girl brianna 2007-04-08 . chapter 14 you finnally made a LONG CHAPTER KEEP DOING THAT |
| Patricia Christian 2007-02-18 . chapter 9 I just finished chapter 8. you are such a great writer you i love your sense of humor and kuwabara as well as your plot. More More More! |
| dcedie 2006-12-17 . chapter 20 You do really good on these except for this one. How can you have the losing player be the Hyuuga prodigy? It would be best if they were fighting equally until he realeases the 128 strikes and that would work better. But you don't really have to listen to me. |
| Kano 2006-11-30 . chapter 9 Awsome chapter.I liked how Lee kept his promise to both Sakura and Tenten.NaruHina!NaruHina!NaruHina!yayaya!really like story. |
| juice931 2006-10-17 . chapter 10 ok... kakashi became a jounin at age 13... but the story is great so far! |
| onigamer01 2006-10-12 . chapter 4 DAMMIT! What a HELL of a cliffhanger! Sure, I haven't read it all yet but... DAMMIT! (Breathes in...and out...) Sorry, got a little worked up there. Seriously, it,s really good work! Very nice! |
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