that was the stupidest thing i've ever read in my entire life. you missed ginny's character entirely. sorry.

OK you want brutal, I have a few problems w/ this fic. The main one being things r very rushed, ie. Ginny's all of a sudden head over heals for Malfoy. And you use the word LOVE at the end. All Malfoy did was ask her out. You need to develope Ginny/Harry relationship a little more. You really need to expand on things. Like Y Ginny's goin out w/ Malfoy in the first place...shes turned on by danger? she wants to ** off Ron? How Harry feels about this...jelous? protective? angry? realising he really cares about Ginny? Why did Draco ask her out...he wanted to make Pansy jelous? he just wanted to hurt her? She was just a pretty fac And wats the deal w/ Pansy, I don't get that whole thing. Why did he do that? Why did SHE do that. All in all it was very very very rushed. Ok I don't want you to think I didn't like it cuz I did, it was a cute idea...but for this much plot you need...well more.

This fic was really good! That Malfoy is a jerk! Poor Ginny, but Harry loves her, and that's good!

cute cute cute! loved it! lota fluff! i love fluff!

SICKLY!

Yeah! I have 4 words. U SUck! The other 2 are just Kiddin! YOU ACTUALLY ROCK! GOOD JOB! AND DONT WORRY I WAS TOTALLY KIDDING! IT WAS AWESOME!

I love it Uve got to keep it up!! if you dont ill die if it isnt finished

Hey i liked but i think u should put liked me not loved me i think love is to strong of a word.

HEHE! I'm reviewing for myself! I know it's twisted but I really don't care. lol

How can anybody who is an H/G fan shipper be brutal? Pure fluff. Yay!