AW CUTE xD

Brendan: Heh man I know you had it you May-ple.
May: -blush- Shut up Snowcap...

AW! haha...rainbow punch...hahahahhaaha

o...so kawaii! HOENNSHIPPING! YAY!
Bouncy: Shut up GG
Sorry about her...good fic...bye

Sorry for not reviewing earlier, everytime I tried to, I couldn't sign in or something like that and then I... forgot. ^^;
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Anyways, its a really wicked sweet fic! Wrong choice of words huh? How about just a sweet fic then? But you should capitazlize the "here" in your title though. And you switch from typing the number out to using the regular number so pick one and stick with it lol.
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But overall, good story, really cute and sweet and just the right amount of fluffy. And I love the way how you used May's POV and stuck with it, most people transfer from first-person to third-person and that bugs me because it throws off the story. Good job!
LaTeR dAyZ!

Cool, I kissed Wally! I've always wanted to do that... He's SO CUTE! This is a cool story! I love good Hoenn shippies. Oh, I get a marshmallow? YUM! *eats marshmallow in less than a second* I like Hillary Duff's music. This fic was awesome! Keep Writing!

Cute story you got there ^_^. Oh yea, and I don't really understand what's up with the hating Hilary Duff stuff, so I won't bother about that. Great job on this fic ^_^.

OMG SD! This is so cute! You're awesome at hoennshipping, keep writing this pairing!
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Yeah i get a marshmallow! Any ways...lol.she called him breadhead. thats so kawaii. i loved this story. cant wait for the next chappie of the chocolate pie fanclub adventure. Bye