I choked on my drink because I couldn't stop snickering. That was wonderful. Leon being obsessed with winning and Sephiroth being obsessed with Cloud...*dies laughing* I love how you portrayed the characters without bashing any of them. Excellent job, truely wonderful

XD i am SO in love with you freaky-stalker-cloudobsessed!seph.

Simply hilarious, I love it, and the SephCloud hinting made me so happy ^^

Scary. Just scary. That was freakin sweet though. Good job.

This is just so funny. I nearly fell off my chair while reading this; I was laughing that hard.

Oh god. Leon's unbelievable. But we'd never have him any other way. :)

I must say, this story was the funniest I'd ever read. It's a fresh change, because most stories about Squall, okay, Leon, aren't this goddamn HILARIOUS! I just wish there was less swearing... but other than that, it's an excellant story, it fits the concept perfectly. Keep up the great work, jen0va99!

*eye twitches* ... *blink* ...*blink* ...AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! oh, this was great!
I love your carefully chosen descriptions of Sephiroth ("a fucking freak") hehe. ^_^
Poor Cloud.
Poor Yuffie.
I don't really feel sorry for Leon, though, lol.
Heh, Poor Sora. lol. ^_^ This was a kick, I loved it :)

OMG XD this is so fucking funny... squall... *hides before he pipes up* is so OOC %'D you could think that cloud took his place, the way he reacts.

ROFLMAO! E! *must read all your fics* This was great! the 3rd Chapter was the Best! *still Laughing Maniaclly because of it* EE! Love Sephiroth in this!! bwahahah! Possessiveness...and he always seems to piss Leon off!! XD...I'm so sick...SORRY SQUALL! Anyway, great fic!

Man, this is hilarious!
Oi, poor Cloud

Okay... Whoa... O.o These peeps got MAYJOR issues...

O.O Whoa...

lol, torture... you make me happy! Good job!

(No animals were harmed in the writing of this review.)

=Ninja-Songstress a.k.a. ShadowKairi=

This is really a reveiw for all chapters:
Squall never loses his cool.
Oh, sorry...Leon
It was great though
-Fan

*snerks* Poor Leon... Well, now poor Cloud XD

hahaha... Leon is a psychopath...or at least OCD or something...

on an unrelated note, Seph dragging off Cloud = yum ^_^

Hahaha, dear God.