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fanfiction999 2006-03-18 . chapter 5
please do a sequel
fUzZyCaReBeArZ 2005-08-12 . chapter 5
Aw! That was so sweet. I bet you heard my squeal wherever you are.
shiny silver grl 2004-06-15 . chapter 1
very cute! What I think is really neat is the way they're both absolutely in character, no matter which scenario you read, and how the details change (how in one Hermione thinks the shack is stupid, in another she thinks it's interesting, etc). I can see it all working in each case. Very good!

-sil
LMR 2004-06-03 . chapter 5
Hmm, I really like that last version! It's good to know I'm not the only one madly speculating on what that whole hand-holding/jerking away/ shaking head reproachfully trailer is about. The movies seem a bit 'shippier than the books! Let's all just hope that trend continues, and there'll be some serious snogging by OotP!
vanti-licious 2004-05-25 . chapter 5
good job. sorry i didnt review earlier.. omg i loved this chapter. r/hr forever!!
fourthelement 2004-05-24 . chapter 5
That was so much fluffy goodness I could barely take it! Oh, wait, I can!
Roxanne Rox! 2004-05-23 . chapter 5
Loved it! Like you said, fluffsville, USA. Please write more. I will R&R every one of your stories, Phoenix!
TiggerLily130 2004-05-22 . chapter 5
Aw! That's so cute!!
megan????????Hi 2004-05-20 . chapter 5
Fluff is always good in a R/HR story. loved the clip watched it with my SISTER... and my cousin at my nanas house. Your story was like one my sister made up. Great stort! :D :D :D
HPInitialDfreak971 2004-05-20 . chapter 5
Wow... fluffiest thing I've read in ages... I'm gonna write some stuff over the summer so if you want to, add me to your Author Alert list. Hope to see more stuff from you soon!
rachel 2004-05-20 . chapter 5
I loved reading the stories. so cute
tephyS 2004-05-20 . chapter 5
NICE WORK! wonderful how you got that from a lil clip! welp i hope to read other work by you!
~tephyS~
Bella 2004-05-20 . chapter 5
oh!
i loved it!
m that was so awesome. the perfect finish!i so have to read some of your other stuff! great job!
kristinmichelle 2004-05-19 . chapter 5
I loved it! Those were so great! It was fun how you made each chapter progress into something more! "even though they would deny it for years to come, Hermione and Ron let themselves get lost in one another." I loved that line! PURE FLUFF!
P.S. Even if that moment turns out to be nothing, they did use it for shippy reasons so they did want to give off the R/H vibe!
squidward 2004-05-19 . chapter 5
oh my! that was so cute! *blush, blush, blush* love it!
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