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| Gensomaden-Saiyuki 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseComing across the part of the story wherein you pointed out that Sasuke would do such bizarre and stupid things in Sakura's presence makes me remember a famous line from a rather familiar song (and I'm sure you heard of this song: Something Stupid). The line is: "...Saying something stupid like, 'I love you'." ^^ Neat work! Cheers! ::Releina Artemis:: |
| Breezybiatch 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuselol, well, i really liked it, more sasu saku, u seem good at them, others make him too ooc |
| his-little-troll 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseA) Its content, not contented. And B) If i were you I'd check this thing for grammar. Majorly. But other than that the story plot is good, and it is very cute. At times it seems as though you are trying to prove that Sasu/Saku are a perfect couple instead of just writing a story, but that's just how I read it. :P Don't worry about me though, I'm much too critical. |
| You Are My Brand Of Heroin 2005-10-21 ch 1, | abuseah omg omg omg! that is the cutest ever , i have never ead anything like it! |
| Icygal237 2005-06-09 ch 1, | abuseKawaii one-shot |
| Hazuki Saiuno 2005-05-13 ch 1, | abuseme like it! |
| Krissel Himura 2005-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm not that a fan of SasuSaku because my fave is NEJITEN! but they are my second fave in the Naruto series... I think pink and black look cool... about the work... I feel contented in it... hehe... it is really nice and just nice... very mild and fresh... |
| taiki-kun 2004-12-05 ch 1, | abuseaww...this chapter was so...cute!! |
| deity of death1 2004-11-09 ch 1, | abuseI love those moments in where the #$%^ing Uchiha finally and truly opens his eyes. But ^&*(... did it have to take so long? ^_^;; Nice one-shot. |
| nancy 2004-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abusei liked that one-shot a lot. |
| dirtandskye 2004-08-06 ch 1, | abusei enjoyed it it was sweet i hope things do end up like that |
| DayDrEaMiNg-child 2004-07-24 ch 1, | abusefor one,i dont think they were ooc.in fact,i think they were really in chara and it was very realistic,kawaii,and nice.i like how the flow went.not too much romance to make it mushy and everything didnt go too fast between them. great job! |
| pink-writer 2004-07-10 ch 1, | abuseactually, it didn't suck... it's really nice. um... write more! (sorry my review stinks... im really sleepy right now...) seriously, it's a great fic! keep it up! hehe! |
| swi.t 2004-05-30 ch 1, | abusethank you for your review ^^ glad you liked my fanfic. this fic of yours is awesome though. it`s very well written, and you managed to make sasuke perfect ^^ i love sasusaku! keep up the good work =) |
| Seiji Kamiya 2004-05-28 ch 1, | abuseSo... You started to write naruto fics as well. It was ok with me. Since you are 1 of the few who reviewed my one and only fic I guess I should say something. Hehe which reminds me I haven't updated it for nearly 6 months. Been busy and lazy, so I only come in once in a while for a quick read. Hope you won't kill me. :) I can't help it a PS2 is more appealing than sitting in front of a computer typing away. |