come on u have to follow it up carry on doing it

plz carry on with this 1

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Draco is out of character. Snape is out of character.

Why would just a "Silencio" spell and and AK spell make Harry fall unconcious. Barty Crouch Junior use an Cruciatus Curse, Imperious Curse, and the Killing Curse one right behind the other in Harry's 4th year, how come he didn't pass out.

The final duel between Harry and Voldemort was very anticlimatic. Try making it more involved than a simple silencing spell and a killing curse. Harry never used the power that Voldemdort "knows not"

brilliant

please please please update soon this is great.

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man u so have to post more this is a really gud story its really interesting neway hope u post more soonish
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just found your story on this damn site! I read it on harrypotterfanfiction.com
really good!! really hope u update soon!

great story! update soon

if harry is so powerful, why would it matter that people are after him? couldn't he just defeat them with a wave of his wand? also, why is he letting other people control him once again, especially after he swore not to? by the way, way haven't neville and luna played a role in the story esepcially after the fifth book? or does this story even follow the fifth book?

HEY! i love the begining of your story, and i can't wait for more! On another note you have your review thing set to login only, so if you want more people to review you might want to change that. :D
Cheers, SIddabjr

really good start, update soon!