pretty good aside from a few mis-quotes. i liked the insight, it was good.

wow pretty neat fic keep on writin' im lovin' it.

I loved it !! To bad she died ,but at least she died saving Riddick!!

BYE,
PitchBlackLover

Nice take on the ending, though I'd have loved to read more. Job well done.

This was really, really good. I love the relationship that Fry and Riddick had created during a short period of time that they spent together. Well done and keep up the good work. I would surely love to read some more.

Very good. I enjoyed the way you retold the movie/story. It captures feelings and things felt very well.

Keep up the good work.

~Little Gilly aka Zorin Thyme

I loved your poignant re-telling of the movie. It shed an entirely different light on the statement that Riddick made at the end of the movie. It was an indication that he had, in fact, regained his humanity through Carolyn's sacrifice. You write beautifully. Keep up the good work.

very good