 Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-09-14 . chapter 1A great story. Very good. |
 Aurian's Flame 2004-11-20 . chapter 1Where's the rest of it?! |
 AraelMoonchild 2004-05-14 . chapter 1Nice! I like the Illyria/Angel costume bit thingie. Nice work! |
 Natgel 2004-05-14 . chapter 1Confused much. |
 Samara Morgan-ring 2004-05-13 . chapter 1Confusion, is this Illyria or Angel? Otherwise good. |
 m 2004-05-13 . chapter 1 good charactorization, but huh? |
 Fred God of 2004-05-13 . chapter 1Interesting. smurf? by the way, you might want to turn your do not accept anonomuys reviews thingy off |