A great story. Very good.

Where's the rest of it?!

Nice! I like the Illyria/Angel costume bit thingie. Nice work!

Confused much.

Confusion, is this Illyria or Angel? Otherwise good.

good charactorization, but huh?

Interesting. smurf? by the way, you might want to turn your do not accept anonomuys reviews thingy off