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Daydreamer-Of-The-Unknown 2008-11-07 . chapter 7
Wowwy i stayed up till
quarter to 3am reading
this, very amusing &&
cute, loved it XD

Adding to favs defo ^_^

x Casondrah Kiku x
Umbrae Calamitas 2008-10-31 . chapter 7
Aw, that was great! ^_^ I really liked it.

I definitely like how you keep everyone in character and it all still flows. It was wonderful.

I'm confused, though... when did they kiss before?

Oh, wait... HA! The cooking scene! I finally get it! ((V-8 headbops herself))

Woo! That rocked!

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write.
Yuuki-Neko 2008-10-27 . chapter 7
I LOVED THIS! This was awsome. Keep writing you have talent!
PancakeLake 2008-06-21 . chapter 6
Haha in my previous review I meant to quote when Seto was folding eggs before saying that sounds like me cooking in the kitchen.

LOL. Seto kissing Joey sounding like me trying to cook.

You must think I'm nuts.
PancakeLake 2008-06-21 . chapter 7
I think I'm in love with this fic. s2

I love how yours is both optimistic with some angsty parts - they balance each other out so perfectly ^^!

And seriously, who cares about the diff between "American" football and rugby? Tis all sports to me. Lol, and "maths" omg I love that word!

Really nice choice of song for the last chapter I must admit. Haha, Seto kissing Joey >> Sounds like me when I'm trying to cook. Hahaha.

Wish they'd eaten the Blue Eyes + Red Eyes dragon cake though. Imagine - Seto Kaiba would get a Red Eyes piece and Joey gets a Blue eyes piece. :). AND THEY COULD FEED EACH OTHER!
So sweet. Literally. Um.

Okay I really need to stop leaving such long reviews on peoples stuff. and once again I must explain something

I would add this to my favs, but my creepy stalker friend is stalking this account. And I like the name on this account. So. I'll add you to my bookmarks and come back, probably to reread it 8 times. Then pause to eat chocolate. Then continue reading for about 19393 more times.

Hehe, and Yugi is so innocent. Shazbot, indeed. I hope that you read my penultimate paragraph in my review, because the rest is seriously just incessant ramblings of how much I love this fic. Oh, btw I probably vaguely touched on this earlier but you know, it's kind of annoying when Americans try to correct English people on their grammar. And I'm an American. The best thing to do is ignore it. Because really, we tarnished the English language rofl. (I wish I could say maths over here instead of math. and spelling of favorite into favourite. Now that is intense.) Okay. Good bye now, and may the writer's block monkey never ever visit you! He's scary!

-Camilia
Diserray 2008-06-11 . chapter 7
lmao xD they'll tease the crap out of Seto from now on!
setojoeylover4ever 2007-10-12 . chapter 7
aww that was so ... What I can't hear you what did you say? ... Sequal m. Yeah i would like that too. Must have a sequal or i won't be able to go on with my life. JK LOL Very goog story i found myself rereading alot of it because it's a very new plot and very interesting and strings of conflicts, drama, love, and most importantly FOOD! :) I look forward to seeing me writings from you.
cres-cres 2006-09-29 . chapter 7
wai! i love this!! awesome job!!
BlackBolt 2006-08-31 . chapter 7
this was AWESOME ! i laughed so much, i thank you for writing this jewel *glomps*

please write more of such storys ? *begging* please ? :)

you have a fangirl in me !!

*hugsdeeply*, bye, Blackie ^^...
Acacia Jules 2006-08-05 . chapter 1
Just so you know, those websites' don't ACTUALLY translate your name. Trust me, if you were to go back and type it in again, you'd recieve a TOTALLY different name. What you need to do to figure out your name, is find it's meaning, then look up the words in Elvish, you can typically figure out your name from there.
blumarshin 2006-06-11 . chapter 7
A friend gave me this fic to read and well it was so good i had to find it to review it. You did a fantastic job! i have never liked Joey at all, hated the man! but after reading this fic, i know it's not true but now i appreiate joey's charactermore, love Seto kiba by the way! The cooking scenes with him! hilarious! never laughed so hard. This fic was really good, i'm goiing to read your other work now.
Two thumbs up! thanks for the laughs!

blumarshin
Darkwitch17 2005-11-05 . chapter 1
I love it!
Please update soon!
Lady Psychic 2005-11-02 . chapter 7
That was a really good story. I liked the cleaver ending too!
MAB LuvR 2005-09-24 . chapter 7
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I seriously do not know what to type down to show how much of a plot bunny goddess you truely are...and dude, that's saying alot as I ALWAYS say something BUT DA** YOU'VE GOT ME STUMPED!

The story plot--IT'S PERFECT! "...for the sake of education (I'll stalk Joey ROTF)" And you didn't make Seto all lovely dovey but actually kept him in CHARACTER! You have no idea how many authors would've start making him questioning his sexual preference in the middle of the story like most would. Also the part where Seto can't cook is ** HILARIOUS! (You got me cussing and I only cuss when I'm annoyed or **... damn you ARE that good!) Hehehe...You'd think that someone whose job is to be the CEO of his own company at the age of 18 would know NOT to throw water--of all things--at an electrical object. That's just rich, real rich. BTW where in the world did you come up with "You are a miracle worker. You hatched an egg that is suppose to be unfertilized." Now that's just hell laughing.

Though on your last few chapters I caught some grammar mistakes (and I'm sure you'll get plenty a more reveiws if you do up date ^__^) I'm more than willing to correct-in fact, if I knew who you were, I'd beg openly just to correct this story! And my friends would know as I have begged openly--once was at a football game and everyone was looking at me weird. So you think I can? If you DO -- say yes and many people will be happy -- just email it to me:

*long whistle* Rambling? That's new, I always keep my reveiws short! Last question-You wouldn't happen to remember what that Lord of the Rings site where you got the name for the cafe is do you? I'd like to visit it as YOU--yea you--have got me addicted to LotR and quite happy you did! BTW at the end where Seto asked when they first kissed and then show the (story) aduience when they did, I looked back and put two and two together. Hehehe so THAT'S why puppy was red! You are so evil that you're considered good LOL
Bloody Days of Dust 2005-09-16 . chapter 7
gah that was wonderful gah ! i love it. i love jou i love seto more!
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