This fic is excellent! Wow, it's been a long time since I've read a Gravitation fic that I've enjoyed as much as this one. The fact that it's a long, chaptered fic just makes it so much better. Love the way you characterise Shuichi and Yuki. Great job.

I can't count the number of times I've reread this fic, but it's so lovely. Your characterisation is perfect, never a shade ooc, and the intimacy between Yuki and Shuichi echoes their interactions in the anime/manga. Perhaps with a touch more realism and less slapstick antics. ;)

This is sort of apropos of nothing, but during this reread I noticed this line near the end...

"Reminded of what he'd just been doing, Shuichi pulled away from Yuki and looked back up at the sky. "Look at the moon. It's huge! It's almost like I could reach out and touch it.""

...and had to wonder, is it a reference to Natasha from 'War and Peace', possibly? It just reminded me so strongly of the scene where Prince Andrei spies her at the balcony. Only, he's enchanted, where Yuki is somewhat more cynical.

Wonderful! It was a great tie up of Gravitation.

You completely bowled me over with the wonderful normalcy in this story. (^^) It's amazing because you captured the atmosphere of the anime really well, and it's in these everyday things that their relationship shines out so well.

This is probably the Best Gravitation fic out there

Absolutely adorable, absolutely sweet...just wonderful. I LOVE the last chapter, and totally gushed over the ending. Terrific.

haha :D aww its soo cute. its a fav!

This was a great story - very cute and sappy! I liked how you wove tohma into it but didn't let him ruin everything!

Nya...

SO SWEET!

Candy, fluffy fluffy candy!!

Shinigami

It has been years since I have read a story on but someone recommended your story on their site and I decided to take a chance. I’m glad I did. The ordinary and simple moments are what I find most interesting in stories, and you did a good job portraying them realistically. I think you did a good job of keeping the characters “in character” as well, which I find is a major problem in Gravitation fanfiction I read. So, anyway, thanks for writing such a gem.

how sweet! *gushes*

Yeah, I've actually reaf all the way through this story and really liked it! Nice work!

The best Gravi fic I ever read. I love it!

Gorgeous fic, and I love the way you ended it. The last few lines left me with bery bery good feelings in my chest and thinking of that fight over the remote just makes me smile. I adored Yuki in this fic. I also loved how well you captured the mood and feel of Gravitation and how in-character everyone was. It's rare when I read a fanfic like this - meaning really good, really well-written, and not depending on stereotypes or plot bunnies that have been around so much they should've contracted something and died by now. In other words, your story kicked butt and I loved it. ^_^

very good...you;r good at it...so yeah thats all bye...:)