Oh. I like this one. Sounds oddly familar, the preachers kid thing. I could sympathize there, but I could mostly sympathize with Buffy, since I'm the youngest of six. Anyway, this is coming along well. I love it, more soon, please.

Mel

this story is good. this needs to be updated!! just wondering--how old is everyone? keep going!

i like it. i like it alot

Cool!! this is really good! plz post more soon! i wanna kno wot happens next! plz!
Love Megan

How old is Faith? Fifteen? So what about Dawn, Anya, & Buffy? I think this has a lot of potential. How about a cute guy named Lindsey?

Another interesting challenge response. So Dawn is Lucy, Angel is Matt, Anya is Simon, Faith is Mary, and that leaves Buffy as the five year old Ruthie, I'm guessing? That could definitely be interesting. I feel like your Dawn didn't have quite enough insecurities here to match either the Dawnie or the Lucy role... she sounded just a little bit too sure of herself most of the time, though the "haven't grown in all the right places" line was a nice touch. There's a certain "I'll die if..."ness about both Dawn and Lucy that's missing, and it's just a bit off to me because of that.
Nice touches with Faith's nicknames, and I love Anya. Hope to see you update. I'm interested to see the Buffy/Angel and Buffy/Spike dynamics, and to see how you deal with Dawn and Faith's issues in this setting.