praypray 2008-08-14 . chapter 1I haven't read/watched Vamoire the masquerade, but I still like this fic a lot. There's this mysterious feeling all through the fic, and the mention of Lupin was a good ending. I think Alexandra and Luna are perfect companions on a dark night, even though I have no idea who Alexandra is. |
Bagge 2006-01-10 . chapter 1Really good portrait of Luna. She is calm, polite, knowing, respectful but most of all sure of herself. She does not taunt the blind ones, but she does not let them change her view of her world. Alexandra is the perfect friend for Luna. As lonly as she, and as crazy (if yet, as you point out, by blood rather than the moon). They can share certain things no one else could understand.
Alexandra is real, as you state in your white wolf summary. But this fic would be just as good even if she wasn't.
Nice mention of Lupin in the end. I thought at the start of the fic that you would make Luna a werewolf. I suppose Lupin could have a few things to say about Alexandra...
"it would not do to disturb this Lady Luna, or is it she herself?" |