Fantastic story! It's so emotional and angsty~ (Oh yeah and I loved the fact that Mikoto named the dead bird after Kuja. :'D) Keep on writing fics, they're awesome!

Wow that was really good! I love your stories! I've read a bunch! mostly harvest moon but this one was so totally cool!

Yay fellow Mikoto-lover!

I liked it. It spoke to me on some level. Good fic!

Hi, lovely small fanfic, it's rare to find Mikoto's fanfictions.
Oh the exclamation things? I wrote Dearly Beloved to be a mangá script... but I abandoned the idea since I started to create my own original characters, but I agree with you, I think I have to use less exclamation points ^^;

wow this fic was amazing! hope ya write more work like this ^^ great job

Interesting. Twisted. If Mikoto can live forever, then where's Zidane? A few spelling errors, for example, "wrench" should probably be "wench," though I think it's kind of odd to see Eiko referred to as "wench." I'm curious to see where this is going.