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adelaide 2006-10-17 . chapter 3
woah... love the fic
ExternalDarkness 2006-06-13 . chapter 3
Lol! this was great :P I hope you do add another chapter to it. I wonder what Saitou's wedding would be like considering how he thinks...but it can't be all that bad! I mean hes the best-man! And I love how Aoshi has a motorcycle...totally cool...
ennov 2006-02-16 . chapter 3
Well this is not too bad ^ ^ keep up the work...
CWolf2 2006-02-13 . chapter 3
This is just a fun piece to read. I enjoyed every minute of it, good job.
gabyhyatt 2006-02-10 . chapter 1
good fic
sueb262 2006-02-09 . chapter 1
Oh! This is simply speTACular fun! I laughed and "ohHO'd" and giggled all the way through. How you've caught everyone with sometimes just an epitaph, sometimes a phrase, sometimes just the description of a color or a movement.

Fabulously well-done!
Garowyn 2005-12-23 . chapter 2
Very amusing. Definitely didn't expect Saito as the best man.
Curryfish 2004-07-05 . chapter 2
This is so great, I was laughing as I read it (especially the second chapter). Love the shift in POVs by the way.
CWolf2 2004-05-29 . chapter 2
I love how you use the differnet POV's. Good work.
Rissi-Sama 2004-05-28 . chapter 2
Aw...this is so darn cute!
chiisailammy@hotmail.com 2004-05-28 . chapter 2
My favorite quote:

"I can feel my lips shrinking in on themselves, so tight. I can't breathe…someone help me…I can't do this"

So vivid. It's brilliant. I can feel her leaning away from him in fear. LOL. briliant!
chiisailammy 2004-05-28 . chapter 1
You, dear, are delightfully and deliciously naughty!

Aoshi, on a motorcycle. Be still my heart. I love your "his bad boy hands" phrase. And the constant emasculation of Aoshi. LOL Wedding ceremonies really aren't created for men's enjoyment. I also ADORED the names you gave them. Creepy! Morning Frost. LOL. This is the most amusing thing I've read in a long, long time. Bravo!
Trupana 2004-05-28 . chapter 2
I loved how Megumi--usually the foxy, sly, confident woman--is totally freaked out by what's happening. Reduced to a bowl of quivering jelly, thanks to Aoshi "Oh my gosh he's so hot" Shinomori. Hehe.

And how ironic that Aoshi's the one who's confident and strong and romantically sly. *sigh*

Ever the control freak, eh Megumi? Hehe, I doubt Okina could see the flowers out of his visions of grandchildren dancing through his head. But I guess if I were getting married, I'd want everything to be perfect too, and properly arranged lillies are part of that perfection.

I love the end, with the three kisses. Mm, what a lovely, playful end to the story. I always imagined Aoshi to be a wonderful, wonderful kisser...

I would be so ecstatic if you would write a chapter from Aoshi's point of view. This is just too good to be left just like this!

~Tru
CWolf2 2004-05-23 . chapter 1
This was so good I just can't get over it. And writing it in Saitou's POV was an amazing idea.
Cherry Delight 2004-05-20 . chapter 1
Hahahah...I believe you 'bout Saints. But look!! What did i say about the horny?? Hmm?? *shakes head* You're all about the sexes, you are...But that's ok, really...Who isn't?
Cherry
PS...I liked that Megumi hid her bouquet. That's just so typically her - mean and frustrating, but hella cool all in one. *shrugs* What can i say - I likes me Meg.
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