this a pretty good, im tired of always seeing people giving ranma a pickachu or a legnedary pokemon right off the bat.

i think ranma might be good with a scyther or maybe try an extinct pokemon

also please update soon

Why not 3 primary partners? A Mew can help him control of the Nekoken. WILL YOU PLEASE UPDATE THIS GREAT STORY ALREADY?

Allow anoynmous signers...
At least you didn't insist on using Pikachu or anything...thats a point in my book.
Later

I suggest more dialogue.
Other than that it sounds kewl.
Wonder if he'll join up with Mewtwo.
*ominous laughter*

update soon! it's a good start and i can't wait for the next chapter!

Your solution to the problem of the Team Choas idea is no solution - like the gladitorial owners of Rome most trainers do not abuse or mistreat their Pokemon. Even at their worse Jessie and James treat their Pokemon better than that jerk who Ash took the Charmilon from; Jessie and James would never leave a Pokemon alone not caring if it lived or died (they even searched for Meowth and Jessie didn't abandon that blue thing that says Baba-Fet all the time even though is for the most part the most useless Pokemon she has.)

LOVE this, keep going... I can't wait to see what'll happen to Ranma... How strong will he get as a trainer. Will he take up scetching as well? I'd love to hear how good he can scetch with his martial art skills but if not then that's okay. I'll keep an eye out for this. :) KEEP GOING I-)

great job

love the story so far but why make ranma so weak?

This seems cool. I think Pokemon by itself is corny, but when crossed over it can be one of the best. I think it would great if ranma freed the pokemon. It would be really funny to see everyone's (characters) reactions to not being able to capture pokemon anymore. Have a nice day...

a good idea there aren't TOO many of these.. I suggest you have Ranma ** of Mewtwo... imagine him dodging the blasts from Mewtwo and saying "I didn't say anything".. "you thought it human" go starcraft with a twist.
And as for his partener.. I'd say... a dog type cause of the neko-ken.

How about have Ranma JOIN Team Rocket? I don't think that's been done. I can see the TR girls going for him though... ^_^

The crossover with Pokemon had been done before in Fist of Pikachu and that is a lot to measure up to. On the matter of where to go with this, the Team Chaos idea has one major problem - IMHO Pokemon have a boarderline slave mentality (owners like Ash being the exception rather than the rule) where the stength of an owner determines how much you obey him. How do you free beings who have come to accept what in essence glorified animal gladitorial combat (contrary to popular belief gladitor vs gladitor contests rarely ended in death - they were worth too much) and in many cases revel in it as much of their owners do?

hello I would try him as appearing somewher else than pallet town. Try him at koga's village or something to make it more original. he'll beat down those gym leaders and their pokemon himself ^_^ I would like a dark evie to follow him. those things are cool.

Team Chaos! - but no-one realises until after he's won a League or something, and Ash and Pikachu join him (because Ash lets his Pokemon go if they want to leave and they're his friends etc anyway.)