that's really good! Plz write more when u can! I really loved it!

wonderful! you should write one for each episode, i've seen it done before...so why not?

Great chapter! Poor Conner, all embarrased! Love the conversation between them, great characterization :) Can't wait for more!

Omgosh! This is SO good! Keep it up! :)

wonderful! keep updating!

(wasn't leader of the whack a funny episode?)

Great start! Can't wait for more! :)

I love this just got to reading it...i'm totally a Conner/Kira Fan and I hate Trent because he's getting in between the chemistry with Conner and Kira This is a really great story continue soon

Another awesome chapter!! I love it! Please update soon!

i love it! you captured the essence of the characters well. i hope u choose to continue the story!

Wow, that was great! You've got Kira and Conner both down cold, very impressive. I felt so bad for poor Conner. . . I'd like to read more :)

I like it. But it'd be better if you continued this and make it to a 100% Conner/Kira fic. I'm looking for fics of this couple because it's only fanfiction that I will ever see this happening. Other than that I do like this fic/

Awesome fic!

very nice. a follow up would be really cool. even though it might have been a one shot, but i'd still like to know what u think could go on after this.