that was so beautifull, really, I mean it. I hope you update soon.

prety good so far

o0o that was good ^_^

now i know who the couple is even though i had a feeling it was kaiba and shizuka but update soon plz! its a really good story

Great chapter it kinda leaves u hanging but i think i know who the girl is

Who is the pairing? Is it Yami/Anzu, Seto/Serenity, Bakura/Anzu? Please tell.

heyy lynn! hehe i really like you fanfic.
sounds so sweet & romantic, lol. continue writing! maybe you'll be a famous author some day [;

great story continue please. Please tell us whos the two persons are!

That was really good, I cannot wait until you put up your next chapter, wel i have to go, by the way, who are the two persons, please tell me, don't leave me hanging

contiue with the story it sounds cool

hmm an interesting piece...short, but sweet ^_^
i quite like ur style of writing - the short sharp sentences are very effective and adds to the mysterious, almost sinister feel of the moment.
plz keep updating! and i want some cookies!
ps. if u've got nothing to read u can always check out my fic ^_^U (nudge nudge, wink wink)