Oh the fluff. That's one of my favourite episodes and you put a brilliant spin on it. Just the idea of them dancing in the corridor with Mal yelling is such a cute idea...Plus very in character. Cute fic, loved how panicked she was when she thought she might rip the dress. Simply shiny.

i will definitely give you some feedback. this is the most sweetest fic i have ever read. i enjoyed it immensely. thank you. it literally made me smile. i love those two. i just wish (and hoping) that they would have something like this in the movie. i guess we shall see. can't wait to see the movie either way. keep writing because moi would certainly keep readin.g thanks again!

Yay! A sweet little moment. I love Kaylee's excitement over her frou-frou dress. :)

Very nice! I am a huge fan of Kaylee Simon stuff!!

Awe. Sweet. I had a plot bunny that looked a lot like this after I listened to the commentary for Shin-dig. The writer, Jane E, talks about how she had a scene between Simon and Kaylee dancing that had to be cut. Thanks for writing that. :)

That was sweet, and very nicely done.^^

here I am, late at night,. flipping through humor fics. Thanks for making my night a little better!

Gah! Cute!

Love the set-up. V plausible and nice to see girly!Kaylee. Fear that Simon is a little OOC in places and I think Kaylee might have had to prod him into compliments. On the other hand this is a tiny quibble compared to a very successful plot - it completely makes sense that our debonair young doctor would be able to teach Kaylee a thing or too...Plus, I love this ship. Nuff said. Please more. Ok, so one more thing was needed...

Veryvery cute. You've gotten their personalities down considerably well. ^__^!

Aww! sweet... though I sort of imagine Simon being the shy one and Kaylee teaching HIM to dance...hehehehe... oh i just got a good idea... :P

great! i luv this couple, and you dont find many firefly romances about... too bad this is a one shot, huh?

Sweet, What should have happened if only Simon did not have a habit of foot in mouth, and told very well.

Cute:) Too bad simon is never able to say the right thing like you have him in this fic. Oddly though, it works because of the fact that Kaylee is only paying half a mind to him i think.

That was adorable! You had them both perfectly characterized. I loved it that Mal was yelling at Kaylee the whole time. Great work!