Just wanted to make a quick comment now that I've found some time to read the new chapter (I will try to get your other new chapters read soon *Hug* ) And it's nice to see the Warthoggs get moved into the city :) A really sweet little chapter for the goodbyes between the two families (Even if Stanley tried to spoil it >.< ). But what I really liked was the tension between baby Graff and Svein :P You know I like rivals as it is, but seeing two characters who were rivals from birth is a new one to me. And I really like it :D

You write some pretty amazing stuff, Blush. *hugs* Please update another chapter soon. I don't mean to sound immpationt or pushy or anything.

Well I've seen you write some pretty amazing stuff before but this one was definitely the best laid out of all your fics so far :) The prologue really got me interested first of all, since most of Graff's storline is pretty much unknown to me. And the first part with Dara sneaking into the room really made me feel warm and fuzzy inside ^_^ You don't find very many sweet moments between a mother and her son like that in the Sonic fanbase, which makes this even more special. Even though I said you wrote teenagers really well yesterday I'm beginning to see you writing babes and young children really well too. And Stan seems like an interesting character, if not a little pushy. But that's what you were going for, ne? Plus you got the sourthern accent mastered perfectly. Heck I still have loads of problems with writing Bunnie's speaking parts correctly X_x I liked the description of Dara's appearance too, even if I hadn't seen a picture of him before I'd have gotten a clear image of him in my mind. And I love his hair ;)