Cool poem, i really liked it. So here are my weird guesses...
1. Haku or Zabuza? Haku grew up in a snowy village and since he was Zabuza's tool, he never had any wishes or dreams of his own. Or it may be Zabuza i don't know...
2. Hinata? My reason is kinda weird but i thought that because she is so quiet and shy, that nobody hears her even if she wants to be heard. Not that that's true, but whatever...
3. Sakura. Sakura always shows her nice self but her inner Sakura is always thinking something different.
4. Gaara or Sasuke? This one was hard... Sasuke and Gaara both sort of have their hearts hidden behind a wall...?
5. Neji or Sasuke? Both of them had joyous memories in their childhoods but now they are both depressed and dark.
6. Sasuke? (again) this stanza described great pain and agony and that the pain this person was feeling was caused by their need for revenge. (I think)
7. Lee. Lee always has a burning passion in his heart but after he was injured, the flame faded and flickered. Also it talked about blue and lee's always calling himself the azure beast.
8. Gaara. Gaara's mother told him to always love himself and only fight for himself. Also, Gaara is alone and looks for a place to actually belong.
9. Haku? This one seems to fit him better than the first cause of the mirrors and the hapless end.
Well those are my interpretations, most are probably wrong. Please email me the answers! Thanks!

O.o I'll try ...
1) Zabuza?
2) Shino. Or Gaara?
3) Sakura. This is the only one I guessed right off on.
4) Gaara ...
5) Or maybe this is Gaara? So many possible Gaara ones ...
6) Sasuke.
7) Lee?
8) Naruto. Either that, or Lee or Gai.
9) Haku.
*~* I need the answers, if only so I'd know just how dumb I am for missing the correct answers.

1. Zabuza (haku? I don't know.)
2. ehh... Kyuubi? I have no idea.
3. Sakura, definitely. Either that or Ino.
4.Haku(?)
5.Orochimaru?
6.Sasuke. Definitely. Could be Gaara.
7.Ehh... Naruto?
8. Gaara! That ones obvious.
9. Or is that one Haku?
Interesting. ^O^

I'd try to guess but i'm not deeply into the series. Anywho...I liked it! It's a good poem and of course i'm waiting on SWH (stopwatch hearts)well c'ya at school tomorrow bye!
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Interesting...I like this. Fits quite well. I can't guess. Third I thought was Sakura...The sixth I guessed was Sasuke...That's it...
It's good though. I'll try to guess some more...^__^'

The first one must be Zabuza, when he feels the snow falling as he dies alongside Haku, and wonders whether or not he will go to the same place as he..that's my guess, anyway.
The second one puzzles me.. I'm guessing Shino, since he can communicate with the bugs, but nobody else can hear them.. That's probably wrong though.
The third one has got to be Sakura, the "wicked thoughts" her "inner Sakura"
The fourth one I think is Gaara, his heart hidden deep beyond the wall of his past sufferings..
The fifth one I think represents the Sound 4 and the rest of the people who Orochimaru has chosen for possible vessels.. I think he erased some of their memories...
The sixth I think is Sasuke. The crimson peers are the corpses of his family when he saw them killed by Itachi, and this vengeful bane is his desire to kill Itachi.
The seventh one is also tough...maybe Shikamaru?
The eighth one can apply to either Naruto or Lee, but I think it's probably Naruto, always searching for someone to accept him.
The final one, that's got to be Haku. The mirror simile is a clue because of his Ice Mirror technique, and he died such an early death..
These are only guesses, I think I'm correct on some.. PLEASE EMAIL ME WITH THE ANSWERS! I MUST KNOW! But, great job on the poetry!

It's nice, kinda hard to tell most of them though

Nice. It's hard to write rhyming poetry, even though here it was only prompted to accure in a two-line period. I really do suck at figuring cryptic things, although for this I might say the first one belonged to Haku, the second to last Gaara, and perhaps the sixth describes Sasuke. You seemed to write this very well so that in every stanza, there's a hint, if only miniscule, to their identity.

So capturing! *.* This was wonderful! AND IT RYMED! I am so happy to find someone like you! T.T
I want to try and guess... Probably will get everything wrong though...
I think the first one is Hinata because snow is white and her eyes are white...? o.o; *shrugs*
The second might be Kiba since he has super ear listening powers... That poem was my favorite!
The third reminds me of Sakura, since she never shows her real self, only her outside.
... I don't know who's the fourth, but that one was awsome. xD
The fifth one was hard... 'memories erased'? It sounds like... Gaara. o.o;
Actually, the sixth one could be Gaara, but since Sasuke all hung up on the 'I wan to kill my brother and avenge my clan' thing, I'm going to go with Sasuke. And I think the crimson represents the Sharingan.
The seventh... I'm not so sure. I keep having Shikamaru's picture in my mind for some reason. xD
The eighth sounds like Naruto a lot... Trying to find a place where he belongs.
The ninth was awsome too. I just don't know who it is...
I'm betting I get all of these wrong. xD

Hm...
This looks very interesting, but I'm not very good at guessing what people mean by poetry.
I suggest that you put up a second chapter where you tell people which person is represented by which lines.
It's still possible to guess since you have to go to the second chapter to find out, but it will help people who suck at analyzing poetry. (Like me :P)