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Turn.Me.On. 2007-09-20 . chapter 7
I love this story. It is original and different in a lot of aspects compared to many stories out there that have similar plots. I hope you plan to possibly update and finish this story. It has been great reading so far and I would love to read more :)
Lindseyiswicked 2005-10-23 . chapter 7
What an awesome story! I adore the way you portray the characters! This is one of the best crossovers I've seen in a very long time!
Scary Vampiress 2004-12-21 . chapter 7
I really love this story. Please write the next chapter quickly!
FallenStar2 2004-08-05 . chapter 7
I am so glad I found your story. This is certainly a twist on a formulated plot. Having all of the gang at Hogwarts is a nice touch. I especially enjoyed the Willow interactions, because she happens to be my favorite character in the whole Whedon verse, both the good and the very wicked dark. Seeing Willow in such turmoil is sad but necessary I believe.

As for these past few chapters, I really enjoyed the exchange between Spike and Hermione. Spike with a soul is really wonky and Hermione seemed to pick up on that. Harry and Draco fighting was brilliantly written. It's always great seeing those two get their dramatic arts on. And Seamus was great fun to read, especially since it does appear he has an ego. And Dawn and Draco's cliffhanger moment was perfect. The first question I asked when I finished reading that was, "You, who?"

Awesome job! I can't wait for the next update! I haven't really read any fics centering on both Draco and Willow, so this is definitely worth the read. And it's long chapters!
Mama T 2004-08-01 . chapter 7
can't wait for more :)
The Last Hope 2004-07-31 . chapter 7
So Spike is all soul having and slightly mad yet none of the scoobies have noticed. I would have thought Dawn would notice, but in eirlyer chapters he was acting very Spike and I think that it would be hard for anyone to find out in Spike doesn't want them to know. I like how the Xand-man underminded Snapes athority. It was so very Xander. Though I did feel sorry for good old Severus. I like how Buffy initiated the fight between the golden boy and Slytherin Prince to prove a point. They are melodramatic with each other to the point of absurity. It make me laugh every time the do the whole battle of wit's and brawn. Seamus really has an ego doen't he? Way to talk about the proffesor liking you when the are standing in the doorway. Ah yes the infamous "Hey watch where you're going" strikes again. I have to say two characters walking into each other in the hall have to be my favorite plot divice to date. When the said "you" I just had to laugh. It was so prfect. That was a great cliff hanger. I mean it is going to drive me crazy until the next chapter gets up, but I wouldn't have it any other way. It is the perfect ending to a great chapter. I can't waith for the next part to know what will happen between Dawn and Draco. The one thing I'm wondering is if Dawn reconizes Draco from the great hall when Hannah pointed him out or if she has been having dreams as well.
Mirrors Reflection 2004-07-30 . chapter 7
O my, I love this story! I cant wait for the next chapter! Update soon!
mj 2004-07-30 . chapter 7
aww man! r u gonna make dawn and draco go together? that sux. no offence, its just that everytime there a dawn go to hogwarts story she ends up with harry or draco. snot that i dun like her i just dont like those two pairings. meh...is buffy gonna end up with spike? will willo get a gal? keep it real and answer my questions!
ChristmasInHollywood 2004-07-30 . chapter 7
Oh luv the spike/hermione talking... interesting... update!
lilguji 2004-07-30 . chapter 6
Hey, Love the story so far though a bit dissappointed. I would have preferred a Draco/Willow pairing rather than a Draco/Dawn pairing. I thought it was gonna be like that at first but its ok. The story is still great and I cant wait till the next chapter.
The Last Hope 2004-07-29 . chapter 6
So there is going to be some Draco/Dawnyness I like that. The like the whole Willow/Draco friends deal that you've got going on. I like that Dawn doesn't seem too keen to listen to Hannah's advice about the Slytherin prince. It was a different approch for you to put Dawn at the Hufflepuff table and to not soart her. I don't think that I've seen that before. She is usually situated with the golden trio or Draco. And hey she won't be part of any house animosity. I loved dawn and Willow's reunion. It was so sweet. Same with her noticing Buffy and co. Xander working with Snape will be very ineresting. I'm sure that it will be a rather volatile combination. There is some major personality clashage with those two. It will be interesting to watch Buffy try to teach a class full of people who depend on their wand to fight. The only physical altercatio9n that I can remember fron the books is the fight between Draco and Ron. And they call themselves purebloods for shame. Some students might no want to take up muggle fighting. There is noting whong with making a chapter sickeningly long. But hey I can wait for the next update. This story is one of the better Harry Potter/BTVS crossovers that I have read. So keep up the good work. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Susan 2004-07-29 . chapter 6
I think that Draco should create an antiVoldermort group with their own headquarters. Draco don't seem to realize that he can't put off being a Death Eater forever. It is either be a Death Eater or die so if Draco refuses the offer he has to fight against Voldermort. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
Mama T 2004-07-27 . chapter 6
omg! luv it so far! can't wait for more! :)
Nobody 2004-07-27 . chapter 5
::stabs Harry and Ron:: ::gives Draco a cookie:: hahahahha...okai I kinda just hated Harry and Ron right then.Like realy hated them.Other then that great story!
brook-lyn333 2004-07-27 . chapter 6
im so happy the rest of the scoobys are there:)
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