love it

i started reading but could not finish because of the characters i wanted to let you know that i dont believe that James somkes the working thinging to i just dont know but its your writing style not mine but i just thought mabye the characters should be closer to the book

First of all I just want to say that is's an awsome story. But did James have to start smoking? I mean Lily's already ticked off at him, so why give her more reasons?

your story is good and i like it better then the first one you just say the word passionatly too much

why is james smoking?!??!?!? eww. otherwise good story

i just realised something (well maybe i didnt just realise it but im pointing it out now)

“DID SHE SAY YES?” Sirius bellowed from the castle. He, Remus, Taylor, Peter, Jackie, and Rachel...

damn... evn in context they cant be next to each other. lol if u look earlier in the story u notice this isnt the first time... they're normally on opposite ends (or as far as possible) from each other in context... hilarious

Great Chapter! i didnt notice until now... but the defying him three times part of the prophesy is comin into fruition! i almost forgot about that it was so intertwined with the story... i like it! Good job!

Wow! I loved it. It was awesome!

I really like this story however Lily forgave him quite easily as to what he said. I think you should have James beging to get back to him for a while. Again good story!

this is an amazing story! keep up the good work.

You bet I'm happy that Matt and Lily broke up! In fact, i'm overjoyed. A little to overjoyed at this prospect i think. But ah well...great story so far!

luv this story~

Just reviewing so i can add it to my favorites list i have no idea how it got off!

this was a great follow up to your last fic and i really enjoyed it. i thought it was great how sirius and everyone had no clue about their relationship. you are really good at balancing out the action with the romance and all that. really really good, kept me interested the entire time. now i am on to read the follow up to this one and by the looks of the preview i am in for a good story.

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and Happy Writing

Petroleumjellydotone.

Wow. U have a lot of reviews. I can see why this was a hecka good story. could u and some of your faithful rviewers maybe read mine and give me some tips? That would be awsome!
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Beka aka-JustAnotherTeenageGirl!