nice.

I like this a lot but you haven't updated, dammit! Arg PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

YK2: TOTAL CUTE-NESS!
Surka: Aw! : big goofy grin : It's just so darn cute!
Dracon: geh... : hurls into a trash bin : Gag me with a rusty chainsaw dipped in acid.
YK2 & Surka: O_o Ew...
Silence...
Crickets chirp, then get stomped on by a very annoying Dracon, who promptly gets sicks again.
Surka: ** in a buzz saw!
YK2: DREAM CATCHER! YAY! GOTTA SEE AGAIN!
Dracon: No... please... not again...
Surka: ANGRY ARSE WEASELS!
YK2: Sorry if you're confuzzled, but I'm hyper, now! Dream Catcher's a good movie! Gotta see it if ya haven't! Till Next Time! AUDI!
-YK2, Surkit Breaker, and Dracon Lilly-
Surka & Dracon: MY NAME!

Next chapter will be better huh? LOL when will it be up though? Wow I can see why you angry with me not getting Cloud and Yuffie together in my fic yet. You're like a die hard Cloud/Yuffie fan. Heeheehee. Well maybe it'll come some day. Well hurry up with the next chapter already! I'm bored! I expect it to be up next... uh... *Blinks in confusion* What was I saying? *Bangs head against table* Oh yes I remember now!I like fod. *Licks lips and rubs stomach* Yum yum.

Hmm... anyways... do I have any contructive critism for ya? I dunno... I'm too lazy to write it up right at the moment. Maybe I'll do it next chapter... that's saying that there is another chapter.. right? or maybe not? Was this like a one chapter thing? Cause if it was.. it sucked.. lol I'm yanking your chain (You do have a chain on right) This was actually pretty good. For a fic that moved pretty quickly. I would of reviewed the other story, but again I'm lazy tonight and right now I'm just trying to waste some time since you're away at the moment. Why did you leave me? How could you!? *Sniff sniff* I'm lonely.

Whoa... I think this is the longest review I've written ever.. Although most of this is rambling and stuff. I would talk about your story but I already did. Hmm... I bet I have the longest review here. Well... maybe longest review anywhere. I don't even know if Fanfiction.net has like a word limit on reviews. lol Guess I'll find out when I press submit huh? Maybe I'll do that now... nah I'll wait a few minutes. LOL I can already see you Iming me and saying 'Dude! What the hell was up with that review!Was that even a real review? It looks like crap to me' LOL It's fun to get people mad. Especially when they try and fight over the computer because there's no way in telling if the person trying to argue with you is being serious or not. Well I think I've rambled enough. I'll try and submit it now. So if this actually does go through. 1) I'll know there isn't a word limit to a review. 2)LOL It was fun writing this. And if it doesn't go through then 1) I just wasted a lot of time off my life writing this. And I'm wasting more of my life as I continue to type away.

Ok seriously I'm going to submit this right now. *Wow what a useless reviewer I am* Click! *CRAP I didn't want to send that!*

Hey that was great i liked it and thankyou for reviewing my story and just so I can tell you my second chappie is out I hope youll review. cant wait till you`re next story comes

Cute!! I like!
Yuffie and Cloud, interesting couple!

It was good, don't be dissing yourself!