FAM FAM FAM!

Whoever told you that you could write must have been intoxicated at the time.

Seriously, what was going through your head when you decided to post this? It’s dreadful.

Do you take some kind of sick, twisted pleasure in mangling the English language?

Please, delete this.

I think that the chapters should be a little long and more detailed. Other than that, the story's quite good! I hope you will update to this story very soon. There's not many Ruin Explorers fics out there! :P

Later,

Wolfy

Pretty good chapter! My only big complaint is that I wish you had gone into a little more detail. Also, who is talking in the first person here? Fam, Rasha, or someone else?

Anway, it's just good to see someone updating in this section again. Keep up the good work!

What RedSheWolf said: this is good (although a tad short), and I wish you would consider continuing it.

This a cutestart but way too short! I need More to read please update soon! I MUST Read more!