 Winterfox 2004-06-07 . chapter 2This fic is taking a look at things from a very new angle -- I've never seen this premise worked on before. The story itself is simple, but elegant: it's not exactly action-packed, fast-paced or filled with drama. Nevertheless, I found it to be a pleasure to read; you've done a good job of fleshing the characters out. |
 Dazzlebug 2004-05-16 . chapter 2This is so good! V. sweet and lots of smiles...
Update soon or I will have to beat you with a severed arm...
Peace out. |
 eiluj 2004-05-15 . chapter 2 Not only only do Frodo's, Freddy's, and Folco's names all begin with F, but their surnames all begin with B! How often do you find two friends with your own initials? [Actually, my brother's two best friends in high school -- and not only did they have the same last initial, but all were named Jim.]
Also, as you may or may not be aware, Frodo's mother Primula's mother's brother Hildibrand's granddaughter is Freddy's mother. That makes Frodo and Freddy's mother second cousin. Frodo and Freddy are second cousins once removed. [Freddy is actually twelve years younger than Frodo.]
Freddy is third cousin to both Merry and Pippin.
This is all on the Took side. |
 shirebound 2004-05-15 . chapter 2Very sweet. I like how Sam was so instantly comfortable with Frodo. And this is so well said:
"I’ll have to check with my old Gaffer, as he’s a bit suspicious of anything that doesn’t have good earth in it, but when he hears it’s Mr. Bilbo, I’m sure he’ll have nothing more to say against it." |
 Amos Whirly 2004-05-15 . chapter 1Excellent! Please, tell me you'll be continuing this! It's fantastic! You've perfectly captured the relationship between Bilbo and Frodo! Oh, PLEASE, keep going! |
 Dazzlebug 2004-05-15 . chapter 1I like this and I'm really intrigued as to what will happen next. Oh God that sounded so stupid, didn't it? |
 shirebound 2004-05-14 . chapter 1This is a wonderful beginning to a story. Frodo's feelings about Buckland vs. Hobbiton are very logical and well written. (One tiny error is that, if Frodo just came to Hobbiton, Pippin is just an infant. But I suppose even an infant Took can get into mischief!) I look forward to seeing where you go with this. |