Pretty good :) Nice eerie "Kirika" feel. If you write another Noir fic please send me a pm.

Noir fic! ^_^ Really, really nice. Although I forget a little what Noir was about...-.-o
Oh well. Great job!

powerful nice fic

I really enjoyed this. Very psychological stuff, and it's exactly how I imagine Kirika thinks - linking imagery to create a meaning. Good stuff :)