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| Grym 2006-03-31 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. I nearly screamed in frustration, however, when you leapt ahead, cutting over their actual talk. I'm glad you came back to part of it, the heroin. And I confess I'd love to hear what you would have done with the rest. Some piece of me believes that the heroin addiction might even pale against some of the other things Jack has done, has had to do while with Ramon and Hector. But you play this very well and I'm willing to believe... |