Liar Cheat!
I did it!
I don't get points though as I was probably not the first to get it.
Can't wait for the elaborate destructo-Voldemort plan.

Wow... Your series really touched me. Got a good cry over Severus dying, I haven't cried like this for a long time now. I really have to thank you for this great story. You have a way with writing, you really got me hooked up. Your series is a real classic. I am so gonna read the sequels! Thank you a million for this experience, because reading this was really a one.

DAMNIT! WHY DID YOU KILL SNAPE?? damn, got me crying here...

The first time I read this story I cried so hard at the ending and many times throughout. I cried in happiness and in sadness. I laughed out loud too many times to count. My second time through was just as emotional and I had a boyfriend looking at me funny every time I laughed out loud. I have to say on of my favorite lines is one by Niamh about killing the pink flowers. Completely fabulous.

Wow, I guess he's really dead huh? Im very glad I didnt give up after the first couple of books. They got a lot more original and a lot better. Thanks for the good reading, :-D

Hey there, great story! I read the whole thing in a week. I love finding completed Severitus. I just have a teeny tiny complaint due do the punctuation things. Using Dude as a family name, Dude's is not plural, as in the Dude's. A better way to do that would be to just pluralize it via Dudes.

Also, your is not the contraction of you and are. That would be you're. Your is something that you put in front of a noun to indicate ownership. Try reading your sentences out loud after writing them. If you can hear them, it makes it easier to judge which word to use.

There, their, and they're is another great example. (Noun, pronoun ownership, they are contraction). Look up grammar online if you ever want to revise this hefty piece of work.

And again, I really (seriously) enjoyed this.

Oh WOW. That was absolutely, unbelievably just amazing. I'm a bit speechless, to tell you the truth. I absolutely adored this series! I HATE that Severus died! (I'm sure you've heard that a thousand times before, but I had to say it.) I really just loved this story. Wonderful, wonderful job.

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I am so sorry I never found your story until now. Just on Monday night I found it and have finished it just now. I loved it...except the bit with snape dying, that broke my heart and I was crying so much at work I couldn't stop and my patients all thought I was ga ga...lovely work can't wait to read the rest.

Thanks so much for sharing with all who read the story your imagination. It was a wonderful 7 stories that I read between odd hours. Thanks for writing something that's there to read.

I know I'm very late in reviewing this since it's been complete for over a year but I don't usually read HP fics. So glad I read this one though. It was awesome and I actually cried for Snape...something I thought I would never do lol. Wonderful fic, I loved it.

the fish slapping is from monty python and the spoon is from robin hood prince of thieves.
awesome story by the way.

your lucky. you get to live in peace. (unless of course in the sequels one or both of them die (not of old age) and leave the other alone

thnx for the awsome story. i have the whole thing save to my hard drive because i keep loosing the site where it is. i actually started this story on but then it cut off and i was devistated. thank u for posting it elsewhere.

lotrfreakandproud ;)

YOU KILLED SEVEROUS!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? HOW COULD YOU? poor harry he just neverget a break does he? he had better live and marry Ni or i will hunt you down and use every hex the lord and lady have stored in those books of theirs!

ps i love your writing please keep going. i look forward to reading the AAU (alternate AU) for this story if it's still being done or if it's already been done

great work. I can't believe how often you update and several stories at once, compared to others who take months to post another chapter.
One editorial note - a lot of your stories you write "your" when you really mean "you're", and also "their" when it should be "they're". Just see in your head if "you are" or "they are" fits the sentence and use the latter spelling then.