Just like to say, so far, very nicely written.
Although the whole quotation mark thing is ** me off. lol sorry. I just hate how people use one quotation mark when they should be using two.

Awesome story! I really enjoyed it and the sex scenes get an A+ you are a very tallented writer. Its a shame that the story will never be finished, but I enjoyed it while it lasted!

Thanks for the great read,
Dogo

p.s. I love how you portrayed Jack! Its exactly how i always pictured him. A real pirate and a valiant anti-hero.

wow! this chapter was HOT! I had to drink some water after this...you are great with descriptions and i love that you take the physical relationship slow. So SEXY! anyways great joy! on to chapter 11!

Thanks,
dogo

woah x x x x

interesting story.

I've enjoyed it so far.

Sorry, don't feel like signing in. You made me hate my favorite character in this chapter. Poor Jenny, I don't think I'd ever survive that situation. :( I do really love your writing, you are very talented. I know it all turns out right, because I'm actually reading this twice now, but I still feel so bad for Jenny in this chapter! Still ove the story :)
Genn

Hi. Yeah. I am a clinically obsessed PotC fan, and I think What JS Wants was horrible. I mean, Jack has self control and is not Irish. And he therefore doesn't have an Irish accent. DUH.

I just had to say, I absolutely loved your story... It was actually one of the first that made me want to write my own fics... sorry I didn't review when I read it :(, but yeah. I hope you write something else soon! [besides the sequels... Lol]

I love your story. It rocks!Can't wait for the next chapter!

hey could you please reply with the link to your affnet. version?
Thanks,
Jay

wow, just finished readign this story from the begging, and i really like, you potray Jack Sparrow very nicely , ofcourse i do love johnny depp and all his charecters, but that doesnt count, LOL

im really hoping for more soon!

your a GREAT writer!
x,
JL4

That's a reason to not call it rape??!!
I do not really mind the fact there is rape in this chapter, it's M-rated after all, but it's dispicable and sick to deny it!!

Hm, interesting. Now on to the next chapter!

PLEAZ UPDATE EXCELLENT PLEAZ AND REALLY FAST

Love the story - please keep writing others