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bubblecat 2004-05-16 . chapter 1
great story~
it's so funny & cute~
orangebronco 2004-05-15 . chapter 1
I agree with nick
"How could anyone be afraid of horses? They're such graceful creatures," Nick replied, his arm around Sara and her head resting on his shoulder as they sat in Nick's living room watching Cary Grant being attacked by a crop duster.
Well, this is a good sweet story. I like it! Keep up the good work!
Anti Darth Ani 2004-05-15 . chapter 1
Simply wonderful! I loved Nick's last line, I found that funny. Great work.
Freddie 2004-05-15 . chapter 1
This was so sweet! I just love it when they're a couple and acting like it and you did it beautifully. They were both totally in character and yet this wasn't far-fetched in the least. On the contrary, it was all very natural. I loved it!
MissyJane 2004-05-14 . chapter 1
I loved this story. You did a great job with this challenge. I liked Greg's response to Sara's picture. That was great.
melliebee 2004-05-14 . chapter 1
hehe cheeky nick :) *grins* loved this is was soo cute and funny. Nick with his boredom *grins* brought a big smile to my face!
forensicsfan 2004-05-14 . chapter 1
Oh, a thousand thanks for taking up my challenge. I LOVED the way you used the ziplock bags! I know guys that would do things like that, grown men or not. :)
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