Aww! So cute! I liked the 'butterflies' analogy...it was adorable. And the butterfly on the nose...a little cliched, but a nice touch nonetheless. I like it! Fantastic job!

Tsuki

That was cute!! He is such a funny character, he reminds me of Ichigo, from Bleach. The journal entry at the end was a good idea.
Have a great day!!

very sweet, very Kyoish, love the end, i can just hear Anime (english)voice Kyo yelling "THANK YOU BUTTERFLIES!", Good Job

cute!

Adorable!
I loved it :) And I really like the way you write too, especially the very beginning part. You really have a way with words.

Aww... cute little bit of fluff! Nicely written :)

lol, so cute ^_^

Its so cute. It also helps that Kyo is a total hottie!

Kagami

I liked it alot! Kyo's so cute in it. Although, I'm surprised he didn't turn into a cat when he kissed her and held her arms. ^-^

AW! I LOVED IT! It was SO adorable! ::wishes that would happen to me:: ^__^;;