OMG! (Yes, hi, this is ObviouslyOblivious) AND I'M IN COMPLETE LOVE WITH YOUR STORY!!

It's so well written, and I spotted, like NO spelling errors. And, I the way you so perfectly portraid (sp?) each character, well, that's greatness in it's self!!

In short, I SO wish I had time to read more right now, but I can't. But, I will NOT forget to read more when I get back online!

Signed: Daisy

it's really a excellent fic, only problem which is a huge one, is that you seem to pop an update one time in a year!
yeah, I think it's really too much, anyway seems that one year has gone by and still no update; make it in november!

update!

well; they can't spend all this time riding in a limo, or maybe the party is held in the south pole? update soon

you're busy it seems, but it would be nice to have a continuation for such a good story. Woudn't you feel proud after finishing it and giving closure to readers of so many years. I can't understand your luck of motivation, it's true that the serie is gone, but this story after so many chapters stands on it own, and has its entity like an alternate universe. I'm not pushing you or something, and I know that you must have plenty of things to look after, but please try and finish this excellent piece of work!

I thoroughly enjoyed every 24 chapters and the slowly-but-surely developing relationship between Seto and Serenity. I loved how you crafted them together, not suddenly having one falling for the other as it is usually done in other stories. The way you've worked their characters is very believable and most satisfying. You gave them reasons for coming together and being forced to get along (aka Mokuba) that were realistic and much more in character than I've ever encountered. Bravo!
Somewhat disappointing is your drifting from your "theme" (Cheer up, Mr Kaiba!) and how suddenly the mood evolved into something different; but then again, the progression of characterization isn't really something that I can complain about. Within the last few chapters, it seemed you somewhat returned to your beginning goal of "cheering up" Seto through Serenity... but again, it seems different all the same: in a good way, of course. I don't know what your plans are for the rest of the story, and cannot even begin to know or guess, but I hope that you somehow return to the beginning concept--your ever so interesting initial idea of bringing Seto and Serenity together. But, if not, then that is most acceptable since you are the author and I am simply the eager reader anticipating the next addition.
For all the technical things: you had some spelling mistakes here and there, and I'm a bad reader for not keeping them in mind to help you correct them. But it just proves how trivial the mistakes are because it did not hinder the comprehension, the flow, or the mood of the story. Your grammar has no problems, so we face no major issues concerning the fanfic's mechanics.
Your note for ch.23 was disheartening but understandable: a writer cannot write when their heart isn't in it. But I'm hoping with the different attitude you showed ch.24 you still wish to complete this story. I've enjoyed your writing and will be most pleased to see another installment whenever you have it ready to post. With that said, good luck with life and I wish for the best!
Happy Writing!

I love this story, I know its been a while but plz update it as so0n as possible cuz its just a great story and I really wanna know what happens next...

please update

update

please please please please please update! I wanna know what'll happen next!

please update

Great story! please update

After god knows how long I've finalyl finished reading this story!!

It's really good. I really enjoy the fact that you build up their relationship instead of changing the whole Yu-Gi-Oh story and make it seem although there has been an interest between the two sence the beginning.

I can hardly wait until your next update.

~GOD Ara

please update!

Please update the next chapter! Don't leave us hanging !