Nice story.

~Anawey

Got any idea when you'll update next? Can't wait to keep reading! It's really great so far!

You have an interesting story going. Do you plan to do any real revising? Your style has changed (improved) from the first chapter to the last so you might consider going through the whole story again after you finish. (If you do... in the first few chapters you used numbers 2, 3 instead of words, they really should be spelled out.)

A suggestion: You might want to use the quick edit in the document manager to draw a line to separate your author notes from your story or put them in italics.

Ooh! Is it... Is his name Hindike? Yeah, is it him?
Anyway chapter looks like it could be good! Pure Massacre! Sounds sweet!

This may sound mean but don't bring him back. It would be extremly predictable and since he's dead the others will want to avenge the death giving them added motive to kill the orcs.

NO! ::echoes Pippin's cry:: Faramir! no!! not the steward of gondor! this can't be happening! poor poor Eowyn! ::sob::

20$ if we guess who it is?

Legolas! Aragorn! Gandalf! Frodo! Bilbo! Saruman! Elrond! Eomer! Celeborn! Thranduil! Sauron! Morgoth! Iluvatar!

am i right? ;)

more soon, this is very interesting. :)

im guessing that it IS frodo...it HAS TO BE

is it frodo? is it is it? more more more! plze? ::begs like a puppy::

Very Good! Post some more chapters please!

That's a really good story. Good fortune with befall you if you write upload more chapters.