Hi! I kie your story. It's well written and well thought out. So please keeping going. I like HelenaWayne/Huntess too. Huntess in my opinion is alot like BruceWayne/Batman only she has less self control and a lot more anger and guilt. But no more darkness that him. Your good at portraing that but you might want to put more thoughts and feeling in.

Always nice to see The Huntress as Bruce and Selina's kid (just like the good old days).Good first chapter. Great second chapter (really liked Poison Ivy's entrance, along with Ivy's characterisation in general). Hope you continue this.

Your basic concept is interesting, though you lay on the exposition a little thick and the expositing starts to run against the current the actual action is generating, especially towards the end. Your rendition of Poison Ivy has some real life to it, but while you say she's not insane, but just evil, to me she comes off as quite delightfully deranged rather than "evil." Ivy's the strongest character so far, which is a bit of a problem in that she's leaving the protanist in the dust. If you want the reader the run with Helena, she's going to need to some help. So far, I find myself most interested in how Ivy might have been involved in Selina's death and why rather than in Helena's potential revenge. Keep trying though, you've got seeds there to water!

not a bad story so far, kid. i'm guessing that ivy's just a red herring though...

Very good beginings of the story. Few errors in the writing. quite enjoyable please continue.

I like how you mixed a lot of different Catwoman history in this story.

Interesting concept so far, methinks. But why did you have her be Slam's daughter here?