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stargaterin 2008-03-26 . chapter 1
Wow, this was sad, but very good written! But I wonder in which point of view it is? Usagis or Mamorus?
SiR-X-16 2002-12-05 . chapter 1
SiR-X-16 loves the emotion in this piece! It almost made me release my energy in the form of tears!
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X5 - 452 2002-05-01 . chapter 1
Hey dude, i really like that one. If i were you i'd make it longer. Like really delve into the feelings of serenity and maybe flashback and see how it all began. Find out who kidnapped Chibi usa and stuff, just to make it more exciting. But i loved the plot and the beginning and stuf, oooh it was sad.

Luv Kristine
Moon Rabbit28 2001-01-23 . chapter 1
WAAAAAAAAAAAAA::anime bawling::AAA. *sniff* good story.
bejiin 2001-01-22 . chapter 1
This is different. Wouldn't Chibi-Usa's parents know that she was Chibi-Moon???
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