Ashley,

Of course I like it! Why wouldn't I? Spike would never be loyal enough, anyway. Go, William!

Hey take a guess who it is? Lol. Tis moi, Michelle! Your personal punching bag during gym. Lol. It was good, but it might have helped if I knew who half these people were. I'll watch the show next time it's on.

aww update soon!

Hey Ash-

Ok good. I wouldn't of killed Spike though. Come on! lol. Anyway. Pretty keul.

This is very cool! A few mispelled words but other then that it was very cool.

Hey. I really like this story so far. William (the puppy) is so cute! I hope you keep him around. I wonder what's going to happen between Buffy and Spike...

Good premise and excellent plotting, but you need to go deeper-penetrate the characters' motivations, desires, and thoughts, and use their dialogue to eplore their character. On the surface, many of the characters' actions seem out of character, and we need to understand why they would do what they are doing. Nice work.

good so far can't wait to read more
Ariel