  SailorNova007 2007-04-06 . chapter 4please continue |
| StarVix 2007-03-12 . chapter 4 O_o Woah! Peter Parker is Terry's father!? This is an aweome AU! And the fact that Terry's mother's name is Mary...it all just seems to work out, doesn't it? Just one question: How did Peter and MJ get from New York to Gotham? |
| gaul1 2006-02-02 . chapter 4 good, byes |
| VeltaIO 2006-01-09 . chapter 4 I wish you would return to this - a very promising beginning with a very intriguing premise. Please continue. |
| JoBO 2005-02-26 . chapter 4 nice - Harry knows that Peter is Spiderman, but is he an enemy or still a friend?
Arianna... lol, I think Terry needs to help his father. Hmm, where is Terry?
Hope you updates soon! |
| jordan 2005-02-03 . chapter 3 write more about this i hate it when the story is left hanging i only review the story lines that i like so if you would finsh the story |
| garden_viper 2005-01-31 . chapter 3 I Like it alot |
| JuhFreak 2005-01-07 . chapter 1 Dude, I remember you! I read the prequel to this a long time ago on Beyond the Knight! Tried to send you some feedback, but you must have changed your E-mail address by then. Good work! You're a great writer. :)
~J'F |
| WolfDragonDemon 2004-12-29 . chapter 3 Please continue |
| PyroDragon2006 2004-12-17 . chapter 3 Hey cool idea. Please keep going. I just found this when I checked out your bio after reading your Knight Rider Christmas one and I have to say you are an awesome writer. So please update soon. |
| Trepverter 2004-12-13 . chapter 3 This story is great! Keep going! Don't stop now! |
| Big B 2004-12-07 . chapter 3 I'm reading the story is good if a little far fetched. Keep it up I'll review whenever the next chapter is up. |
| ryu 2004-11-24 . chapter 3 im still reading it, and i think its pretty cool but it needs more ch.s so pls hurry. i kinda figured they had reproduced his poweres. but you know that batman and spiderman was around the same time, so if it were that way in the story than peter would be pretty old. |
| Chuck 2004-11-10 . chapter 3 I really like this story. If you do not think anyone is reading this, then finish it quikly. I have read some stories on this site that the author did not finish. They were really good stories too. If the person who wrote the story thought that no one was reading it, then the person should have finished it anyway. Once a prodject is started, like a story, finish it! |
| trecebo 2004-11-10 . chapter 3 Interesting crossover here. Spidey seems to be en vogue these days. Sigh. Peter Parker--the everyman... I like it. Keep writing. |
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