good job

Nice happy ending.

It was really good, but I think the way that you wrote the ending kind of killed it for me. They were too OOC for me. But I still liked it! Good job.

Hehe, oh Seto and his alterer motives. Calling a truce so that he can ask Jou out. Nice. ;D

Oh, jealous much Jou? ;D

that so cute I love it and so funny how Jou kept saying don call me puppy and seto still call him Puppy lol

Aww... that was so sweet! You should put a part in about how the ones who are spreading the rumors find out, or something.

Simply kawaii! _

I loved this story, it was so adorable!

And yeah, rumours are just rumours, nothing more, so little Jou doesn't need to worry anymore!

Loved it, excellently written, great work!

Miguels-Lover

Aww. aren't they so cute together...

Nachzes: [stares at black peice of paper she holds in her hands] Where's the piccie...? [turns the page over, flicks it, tries to peel it apart] I see no piccie...

Lieh: [sighs] You use the power of your hentai mind to project the image of the two kissing into your brain. It's an author's notes thingee. You should know this.

Nachzes: [pouts]

Lieh: [sighs] [rolls eyes] [seizes paper and draws a picture on it] [shoves it back at Nachzes] There.

Nachzes: [brightens] Hikari, you found it! ...Only...this looks suspiciously like your drawing style... [shrugs] Eh. [pockets piccie] [claps hands together] Well, then, here's your reivew, in point form:

-Liked it.

-Loved it.

-Would add to faves list, but do not want to clog it up.

-Highly reccomend it.

-If create a Seto yaoi C2 community, Puppyshipping C2 community, or YuGiOh yaoi C2 community, or a palin slash/yaoi C2 community, will add this fic to it.

-You are an excellent author(ess).

-I commend you.

-Good choice of lyrics.

-Again, I loffed it. Much.

KAWAII! CONTINUE PLEASE!

This is really really really really really really really really really CUTE! I love it!

cute story

Yay! I love it! I'm so glad we're planning the wedding. Wait! Is the minister supposed to help plan the wedding? Oh well.

so cute endign

great ending! i liked the newer versions of the old chapters too.